Marvellously written story, thanks so much for sharing it. Very unusual twists throughout, I was totally engrossed :-)

I really enjoyed the twists on the story. I think the way you wrote from Renesmee's POV was pretty great... And Aro's transformation was MIND-BLOWING!

Good work!

LOVED this story! It contained some turns and twists that I wasn't prepared for...wow!

I can truly say this story is amazing. I like how Jacob and Renesmee end up together, but I also like how it took them a while to get to that point. You are an amazing writer. The best that I have seen on this website to be completely honest. If this weren't based off of another story I am sure you could make major money off of it. I loved the imagery, and your wonderful use of vocabulary. I could go on for a long time about everything that I loved but I honestly cannot find the words to describe this.

Loved, loved, loved.

Tears and cold chills, my beautiful daughter Carrie Lynn, you accomplished both with your writing...I loved reading your book...after I once got started I didn't want to quit reading until I finished. It is totally awesome just like you! I love you bunches, baby girl...Mom

I FUCKING LOVE THE ENDING ! GREAT WAY TO END A STORY IM ABOUT TO READ THE SQEUAL CANT WAIt!

Firstly, I would like to commend you for a well written and interesting story.

Constructive critism - perhaps a bit more dialogue would make the story more lively, and for me it was a bit tiresome to read about yet another love triangle as this has been done in the original twilight books. It was also a bit weird how Nessie was portrayed as the centre of EVERYTHING and I kind of got the impression that the world revolved around her from her POV.

I do like your story though and thought there were flashes of genius in it so well done.

:D You've done a great job with the chapter corrections. Congratulations! (:

awesome story , thanks!

I can feel her anger, but I don't think she is as sure of herself as she wants everyone to think she is.

I am blessed with a daughter who has such a way of putting words together to create the flow to bring the reader into the story!

Reading this book for the second time, I love it even more than I did the first time. The characters simply come alive for me, and your writing draws the reader into the character's lives, immersing us fully into the story. Lunar Phases is absolutely wonderful, and i'm looking forward to reading more from you!

Enjoyed the little father daughter moment.

Wow. I loved that she changed Aro.

And a happy ending. Thats so great.

Great story.