That was a great story. I loved the ending

Allen is so adorable

I love the base you used! The Doll House arc from Ghost Hunt was my favorite! :D

Why do you use the word 'learn' or 'learned' instead of teach or taught? The grammar, word use, sentence construction and more is terrible, but I like the story and can mostly piece everything together, however there are things even I can't understand making me question three things: How old were you when you wrote this, if you were eighteen and above were you drunk most of the time when writing it or is English not your first language? A fourth question just made itself known. Were or are you simply inept at spelling, grammar, and how you word your sentences?

You must really love ghost hunt, don't ya?

I'm starting to think your following the ghost hunt arc. First, the school with trapped ghosts and now the labyrinth manor. Not that I'm complaining. 5 STARS!

that bulb reminds me of that ghost hunt episode, especially with those white souls and mansion. Oh, and defidintly Allen's dream.

Could you rewrite this fanfic? :or it's really good, but the parts with Vlad Dracul are a bit too different from the original. The sentences and spelling also have a lot of errors.

Haha. Such a fitting name. Doctor Tunteeton! Did you know Tunteeton means 'unknown' 'emotionless' in Finnish. Such a fitting name :D I love your story!

Love this fanfic! :)

Ghost hunt? Hehe crown clown reminds me of gene and allen reminds me of Mai.
-WhisperToTheWolves

You copied pretty much Everything from the actual ghost hunter -.- meh... No fun. Go back to the exciting story in the beginning where everything was your idea

yep, you got this off "Ghost Hunt" for sure (but the way you've used the characters makes the stori pretty cool)

... You got this off "Ghost Hunt", didn't you :I

this reminds me of the anime "Ghost Hunt"