PLEASE WRITE MORE! ITS INCREDIBLE! MORE THAN A ONESHOT! PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Please update, this is super good and i really like really want to see what's going to happen next

Wow. This was really good. Well done.

And I don't know what you're talking about. The writing isn't messy at all. Haha.

Very good work! Ive never read a story with one chapter that is a good as this. Well done :)

i like it! please tell me you are going to write another chapter?

I quite enjoyed that... 3 Leah you're amazing. :D

-Shann

WHOA.

The H/Hr shipper inside me just did backflips.

This was AMAZING. Oh, man. I could really feel Harry's anguish, and this makes me appreciate him so much more...

ha ha ooohhh steammeh

Awww I hope that isn't the end. Please write more! That scene in the movie was SO hot! You made it even hotter. Maybe I need a cold shower. Lol. Write more! Please?

It's truly a shame that this is just a one shot, I really hunger to know what happens next! What is Ron going to think of Harry fainting? After watching the movie last night, I offically became a Hermione and Harry shipper. I always thought they would have made more sense than Hermione and Ron. (I also always thought Luna and Neville would have made an adorable couple as well.) After Ron left and Harry tried to cheer Hermione up and after Hermione put flowers on Harry's grave I was like I don't care what JK. Rowling says they would have been the perfect couple! Ron was always making Hermione sad or angry (remember the scene with the birds a few books back)and Harry was always there for her; trying to make her happy!

This is actually quite good. I've just seen the movie, so this scene was very vivid in my mind as I was reading. Well done.

I see that it is marked as complete. That's a shame. I'd love for this angle to be explored.