Wow, this was awesome. Incredible good. Just fab.

I've just come across this story and all I could master was... WOW! This is one of the best E/C stories I've read! :)

I loved this story of yours ;) ( i love both of them :D)

Brilliant written and the idea, the story line ;)

This was beautiful, so nice written, just wonderful.
I hope you will be writing more stories, I'm for sure will looking forward to that.

I love this story. I for one am fan of Cal/Eric/Jake love triangle :) I'm happy she's with Eric, but I love him being jealous and insecure and Cal calming him down so beautifully!

Beautifully written! :)

One of the best EC fics I've ever read! Great job, I hope to read more by you!

I love this story so much. I have been meaning to write feedback for awhile now-sorry it took so long!

There are so many things about this story that make it fantastic. The beginning is perfect-setting the theme for the whole story-Cal knowing something is wrong with Eric, but hesitant to jump right into things with him, she gives him time to relax and process his day, waits till the night is calm and they are alone. I love the entire story once they are home-Cal getting Eric to admit there is a problem, then them both baring their souls! Your words are so descriptive, I feel like I am watching this all happen right in front of me while I read it. I love that the story is long, but the reader is not left wondering anything, you tackled all what ifs and incorporated everything in a nice sequence. This story has such angst, filled with overwhelming love. Love, not lust. So much better for this story.

You are such a talented writer-don't stop. You're other story (that I can't believe is only your first!) I am following as well. Keep this up, you have a special gift. This is a story that is so well written even if you didn't follow CSI Miami and even if you weren't in love with Eric and Calleigh, one would read this story and fall in love with the story and the characters!

Can't wait for more from you!

Geez! You're an amazing writer! Good work! Keep it up!

Wow, that was amazingly good!

I don't even know what to say, but this is the best fanfiction I ever read you sumed up everything about Eric and Calliegh, from friendship to lovers and ups and downs all in one in this story, until it tugged at my heart, because it was so earth shattering and mind blowing with all types of feeling all rolled up in one, that I never read a fan fiction about Eric and Calliegh that had everything they went through to how they feel in love and how they over came all the obstacle that held them back all in one heartfelt and mind blowing chapter, all I can say is good job well written, keep up the good work.

Wow, I think it's safe to say you've captured the essence of Eric and Calleigh's relationship (and then some). I love how you wrote them reading and responding to one another because it was so intimate and sweet without being contrived or over the top. I think you portrayed both characters exceptionally well, from Eric's feelings towards the Calleigh/Jake thing to Calleigh's explanations and assurances.

I thoroughly enjoyed Calleigh's "Jake and I had sex and it was good." It made me chuckle, but more than that, I think you would see that level of honesty between Eric and Calleigh where she's like, "Yeah, good times with jake; he was my first love, but he's got nothing on you." And then the whole ending? Adorable! I think I would have been perfectly content with Eric being all sweet and "No, we're not going to be intimate right now because we've just been on an emotional rollercoaster" but the way that you wrote it was perfect. Calleigh acknowledges the emotional upheaval but makes the effort to show Eric just how much she loves him. It's a beautiful give and take on both ends, and this is seriously why Eric and Calleigh belong together.

Anyway, I don't know if I made too much sense, but you did a wonderful job, and I seriously hope you write more EC stuff.

ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! It was adorable. I LOVE your stories! At times I thought Calleigh might be a little out of character. She isn't one to share all that stuff... but I totally didn't care. Because the story was EC love and so wonderful!

really good !

Hahah I just love Maxine.

This story is amazing.

I like how protective Eric is