| Reviews for Life after Death |
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pumpkinking5 chapter 10 . 2/18/2012 Thanks! So Zac loves Olivia now. He is going to be with her in the afterlife. He always loved her. It is just different than his love for Gabby. I guess Olivia needed Zac's love. Zac needed her love. He found his happiness in the afterlife with Olivia. Gabby is going to move on with Dawson. She suffered enough of guilty. So Jason killed Zac at the house. He saw his own death. He understood now what happened which I don't get? Now, I get the Life After Death. Both of them are moving on with their new loves in their lives. |
pumpkinking5 chapter 9 . 1/21/2012 Thanks! I was so sad and heartbroken with this chapter. Vanessa is keeping a secret which she feels that Zac wouldn't forgive her. She wants Zac to be happy and maybe being with Olivia will make him happy. She is sacrificing her happiness for him Zac is torn on Vanessa's decision. He knew it might happen but he didn't think it would hurt him so much. She paid Jason $5 thousands to keep quiet and not say anything? Right? I didn't quite get that part. |
cncgrad02 chapter 9 . 1/21/2012 Okay, I just have to know... ...what is this big secret? Please continue... you can't leave that one unanswered! |
pumpkinking5 chapter 8 . 1/11/2012 Thanks! I was literally crying. Zac left. She got closure, yet it was the wrong kind. She didn't tell him what happened. How can she get closure. It was a really true closure. It was fake in my opinion or am I wrong. |
palmbeach chapter 7 . 12/9/2011 excellent chapter |
pumpkinking5 chapter 7 . 12/8/2011 Thanks so much for updating your story! I was overjoy and surprised that a new chapter was posted! YEA! I find it very interesting that Vanessa can block Zac from her thoughts and eventually her life. Olivia explained this to him. It didn't sit well with him. He realized that he could lose Vanessa and Layla from his life. They made love! YEA! It was beautiful and romantic. Both of them needed it deeply from each other. Yet, Vanessa is keeping something from him which is not sitting well with him. Olivia told him. He is letting it go for now but, secrets have a way of exposing themselves when you least expected it. I liked that Troy made have a chance to really life in another body and can be with Vanessa physically in the world. Can't wait for the next chapter. It is getting more interesting and intriguing. |
pumpkinking5 chapter 6 . 8/20/2011 Thanks! OMG! This chapter was very informative and romantic! Zac and Vanessa are beginning their journey as a family after Zac's death. Their bond is more stronger than before except for Jason lurking and the wating. Olivia seems to be a character that might be able to help Zac and Vanessa. Zac is listening to her with an open mind. Her story is so tragic and sad. Yet, she sees that true love does exist in Zac and Vanessa's life. I really hope that Olivia doesn't come between them. Please! I liked her character as a friend who is helping them with their situation. Also, I don't think that she wants to experience another situation like before with her friends. Also, she knows that Zac would never jeopardize his relationship with his wife and daughter. She witnessed their loving exchange between them. The part that she kinda transform was intriguing. Was there a reason for the transformation? That section happened out of the blue and was a added piece to the puzzle. Good luck in school. Thanks for not abandoning this story. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
pumpkinking5 chapter 5 . 7/30/2011 Thank for updating! YEA! Vanessa is making plans to leave and live in Arroyo Grande with Layla. She needs to get away. I liked that decision. Aubree and Landon are the children of Ashley? They are going to play a major part in Layla life. Very interesting. Zac and Vanessa were getting back together. Jason was upset that they were reuniting. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job of the storyline and pacing it. |
Gemma chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 Love it, it's coming clear and I can't wait for the next chapter |
pumpkinking5 chapter 4 . 4/24/2011 Thanks for updating! Vanessa blames herself for Zac's death. Jason just push and push. Zac is making sure that Vanessa is taking care of as well as his daughter. Jason is a prick. I don't know why Vanessa would keep his friendship. |
pumpkinking5 chapter 3 . 2/20/2011 I really like this chapter. Vanessa was so strong and really want to be with Zac. Zac is determine to be with Vanessa and Layla. I liked how Zac can touch her physically. Wonderful job! Can't wait for he next saga. |
orphaned91982 chapter 2 . 2/19/2011 how did zac die? in a gunfight? wat? |
pumpkinking5 chapter 2 . 2/18/2011 Thanks for the note. I can understand your feelings. Yet, I hope that you can continue your story. It was so beautiful written. Thanks so much for continuing it. |
Clembo29 chapter 1 . 11/24/2010 Sounds good! |