Great story, great ending. Bravo!

a little angsty to start, but it ended well. Nice job.

until next time,

coreymon77

Nice story. Loved it but the ending was pretty quick. Thanks.

Nice.

Great story, I liked how you had Sarah show alot of emotion at the end, you don't see that much emotion from her on the show

Simply Awesome. I saved this to my favorites list.

I'm hoping the fact that Chuck never was trained to operate without the Intersect is brought up as the mistake it is. They should've trained him to defend himself without it after the Beard at the latest.

But then Shaw was in charge then and he was after all an idiot.

While I don't think I would like for the show to go here, I love this story. The twist at the end was very nice. Definetly with a re read.

great story