I'm disgusted by the Jessica Stanley thing.

I don't get it...Bella isn't grossed out kissing Edward lips? He just said he went down on Jessica Stanley! OMG...I wouldn't kiss those lips not after knowing where they've been, she should have left right then!

You know that once he had oral sex, he was no longer a virgin, right? It's called oral SEX for a reason.

Nice, but it is quite annoying reading the "sex hurts" for girls thing. Edward, being the awesome man that he is would have done tons of research on how to make it more comfortable with lube, multiple orgasms before penetration, ect. I think girls also need to know that sex doe not have to always hurt the first time. Other than that, good read.

Well... You have jacob ask her out after she was crushing on edward hard and he was obviously crushing on her... You'd think that'll cause makor BS between edward and bella but... Two year time skip. Bs at its finesse.

Cute story. :)

I had an emotional roller coaster of a ride going through the entire story and glad of it. I read a snippet of this on The Wayward Pushers so had to come read this story and your profile. I can't wait to read more! Thank you!

I lovd that it would be awosome if u continuded this! Im gonna go favorate this!

I enjoyed this tale of "young true love"

I don't usually read anything referring to religious themes, however I'm so glad I gave yours a chance. Very well done, not at all preachy. ~Sweet & Loving~

~LauraLeigh

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loved this story so good :)

Did I tell you how much I LOVE your writing? ABSOLUTE PERFECTION! AGAIN! You definitely have a way with words. Loved the o/s totally awesome!

*sigh* So romantic. So much happened in a such a short piece of writing, I enjoyed every bit of it. I think I should read one-shots more often...sometimes multi chap fics drag on and I'm really enjoying your one shots!

It started off really good, but I have to say I was a little upset by the end of it. B and E seemed rush and Bella's feelings for Edward didn't seem real to me so I felt sad for Edward. Bella said she was in love with Jacob and that doesn't just go away.

Billy had said to wait for your soul mate. Well, even before Jasper died and after Bella met Edward she was still crushing on Jacob at the same time as being supposedly infatuated with Edward, so I have to say it was all Bella that pissed me off. She and her feelings don't seem realistic or make any sense to me.

The Jasper storyline was unexpected and made me sad though it did add an emotional medium to the story.

I am in no way attacking your story and I'm sorry if it seems that way. I'm just giving my thoughts on the story and in particular Bella. I really liked Edward though.

Nice one shot, thanks.

Another great story. I really had to fight myself to keep from crying when Jasper died. I don't know whether to hate you for it or applaud you because it just made the story. The fact that you could evoke so much emotion in just 11,000 words says a lot about your writing skills.