Great job on the story. :)

yes, he did it

which is why i can't stand oneshots

Oh I really really liked this one. It was very sweet and fluffy. They are jusy so cute togother. Loved it!

i actually cried a little. that was so good and so sweet. i love this pairing and how you write them. I just discovered all your other one shots, so i better get back to reading!

I thought I reviewed this ages ago, but I failed! This was WONDERFUL I dearly love this little one shot...I loved their date...don't see enough of real dating in the stories, and I think it was cute. I am so glad Randy finally let John it. Great, sweet little story, told by a Master story teller. I would like to see more of this one...maybe a sequal where they marry or something.

hot and sweet

This was a great story! can't wait to read another one! hope next time its john in randy's place and randy in john place lol

AMAZING, is all I have to say. This story was hot, powerful, and just plain amazing. Thanks for writing this, it was AWESOME, like the Miz awesome, haha lol jk jk, but it was a great story.

wow they loved making love to each other hahaha.. loved the story it was great!

Awwww this was so adorable! Sorry didn't review sooner..but this was great : )

I Love it...specially the part Randy says I Love u...it's so sweet and cute :)

hawt Hawt HAWT! LLLLOOOOOVVVVVEEEE ITT! Love all ur storys