Reviews for Teardrops On My Harp
kyouko chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
You have been on my favorite's list for about four months, yet I never got around to reviewing any of your work. I'm sorry for that! I'll start with this one, simply because it's my favorite.

First off, this story is so hauntingly deep. The first time I read it I literally burst into tears. The angst was just so deep for me.

As much as I respect the idea of Midna x Link, I refuse to support simply because of Zelink. This story was so beautiful, especially how Zelda was conflicted with trying to either:

1) Keep Link to herself.
2) Make him happy because she loves him.

And of course, Zelda being the good girl who loves Link more than she loves being happy, told him about the alternate way to the Twilight realm. The whole time I read that, I was like, NO! DON'T DO IT! But she did do it.

I really sympathized with Zelda, especially near the end where she was drunk and so hurt.

Throughout the story, various times I've wanted to sock Link in the face. Really, I have. Zelda needs a hug right now.

Thank you for writing such a beautiful story! Now, only seven other stories to review... /facepalm
SoostheMoos chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Oh, how sad. I admit I have been known to be sentimental, but this drew tears from my eyes. Too young to know love, but old enough to emulate emotions, this tugged at my heartstrings. I much enjoyed its poetic style in relating the story. Though not unpopular, you applied it well. I also note that the general plotline isn't exclusive, but you filled in cracks well. Well enough for me to deem this excellent in terms of storyline versus delivery.

Overall I think this is a great fanfic, and believe it will be difficult to find another Zelda fic with similar enjoyability.

Live long and prosper,

Theo G.
Melithiane chapter 1 . 11/3/2011
*sniff* This story made me cry a bit... But it's wounderful written... It made me feel what Zelda felt... *cries*

Hope you don't mind such a overly emotional reviewer...
anter0grade chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I sincerely thought that I had already reviewed this story, so I'm sorry about the wait. But this was probably the first story I've read in the LoZ Archives, and it definitely introduced me into this fandom. You captured emotions perfectly, and I couldn't help but feel bad for Zelda and the onsided Zelink views. Although I would love to read the aftermath of the wedding, I'm not going to tell you to continue this oneshot. I learned that most authors don't intend to extend their stories not matter how much begging is involved, so I won't force you. This was a very good read and perfectly paced. Looking forward to reading more in the future if you choose to.
ShadowNinja1011 chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
I'm thinking that this was awesomely written
Nayru Elric chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Nice! :D I think this story was even better than your other one, but I'm curious, are they connected in any way? Your "trilogy"? If they are, that is even better!

I had high expectations for this story, and they didn't disappoint, it was WAY better than I thought it would be! Some of the love between Link and Midna was a little cheesy, but I still think it was way better than I could do, and not as bad as you made it sound! The wedding was perfectly described, it sounded beautiful, the other descriptions were interesting and wonderful as well, and the scene where Link and Zelda are in the library made me feel for Zelda so much Just the way that you described her pain later on. When Zelda was going to keep that book on the Twili to herself, I was like: "NOOOOOOOOOOOO!" But then she said she couldn't do it-though who could.

All of the characters seemed like themselves, even Link who doesn't talk. You made him talk in long lovely sentences, but still made him seem like himself! I also loved how you made "Soft" and "Wisdom" in Zelda's head a little devilish, and nipping at her the whole time, like they were Greed, or one of the other seven deadly sins from Fullmetal Alchemist!

I didn't see any mistakes at all in this story! (Except for at the end then I just hope you know that Link isn't an elf, he is a Hylian, but you were probably just saying that as a description.) I am adding this story to my favs! :) I WILL read your last story of this "trilogy" later, and review! XD

I can't wait to see what you have in store for the Fullmetal Alchemist story that I requested! Hope to talk to you soon!

Nayru the Automail girl ;)
xLinkk chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
This.. Is... So.. Amazing!

SERIOUSLY! I don't like songfics. Until now.

This is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read!

It's sad. I'm crying right now (that just means you did a good job)

Ahh just.. Amazing, excelent, superb, JOB! (I couldn't think of anymore words)
child-of-the-rain chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
I've always wondered what would happen to Zellie if Link and Midna got together...interesting take on it.

I almost cried. (that's a compliment to you.) 8D

-Sage

"Heroes fade eventually, but legends never die." LoZ: Wind Waker
Fox573 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Totally amazing. I disliked songfics...that is, until I read this one. You gave many details that most people would leave out, and even though it was only one chapter, I can tell you put a lot of work into it. It was very sad, but it all fits together (including the song) perfectly. Being the ZeLink person I know you are, you should continue this and tell us what Zelda does from here. It can't end yet, because the readers are still hanging. What DOES happen to Zelda after this? Gah, just write more.

Anyway, VERY good story, definitely earned a Favorite.

-Fox
thisisembarrassingbye chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Oh. My. God. That was "super great" (Sorry. Watching Full House. Couldn't resist.) But seriously, that was a great fic. You got me crying. Now, thats damn hard! But I am feeling a bit emotional... But anyways, good job!
Young at Heart21 chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Great first fiction and also I would love to see Links reaction to all this. Maybe Hinder's Lips of an Angel"?
Unusedaccountcausenodelete chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
It was amazing!

Abesolutly beautiful.

U managed to make it realistic and the details were perfect! I would love to read more from u.