Vale, me encantó. Creo que este fic es fiel a la personalidad de Tenten, por eso me gusta, ademas del ship ShinoTen que últimamente adoro. Felicitaciones, seria buenísimo que siguieras escribiendo sobre este par

oof, my feelings

Oh my word this is beautiful! I just adore the fact that you didn't bash Neji or Shino's wife while making TenTen and Shino prefer one another opposed to whom they have already.

This was so deep and I'm hooked on ShinoTen XD I will always ship NejiTen and KankuTen though.

Yes I know, I'm a betraying shipper :3 But it doesn't matter to me!

~Poodie

This story still leaves me so curious. They were together before but what broke them up? Was Shino's marriage arranged? Why couldn't he be with Tenten? Will this lovely author be continuing this? Lol!

This was a refreshing read, in the sense that the plot used was not usual. I liked it very much.

i loved it shinoten is amazing and the storie is perfect and i could actually see that situation happening to

Great story. Though I don't condone those sort of affairs either, that's hardly the point of the story anyway. It was more than enough for me to enjoy the intricacies of the character relationships, combined with your ideas and gently seasoned with the intrigues of immorality (taboo topics seem to have that sort of effect on the average reader ;P). I'm very keen to read more of your ShinoTen stories. Loved this story. :)

I was listening to Never be the Same by Red while reading this, and I was astounded by how well they went together. I understand the whole thing about extra-marital stuff. It's wrong, but sometimes the plot bunnies just won't leave. I love how you write, and you have made ShinoTen one of my favorite pairings.

NejiTen is over-rated anyways ;).

I feel a bit shaken by this story. It was so emotional and intense. I love how you managed to keep both in character and managed to give both a background that would make their actions believable.

This was a nice read! very emotional

Wonderful story. It really tugged on my heart strings. You manage to keep the characters in character and not fall into any cliches. I know you don't support extramarital affairs but sometimes there great reasons behind them. Love this story just very awesome.

This is really cute! I like it!

A very interesting glimpse into their lives.

You had Shino and Tenten's persoanlities down pat and the expectations and problems they had with their marriages were very believable.

I'm glad that you didn't turn Neji into an abuser or something like that, it really sold to me the realism of the situations facing them and how Neji wants to do right by Tenten, but he feels pulled in the other direction as well to his other family.

The part of this I enjoyed the most was most likely the way that, even though she is having problems, Tenten still loves Neji and that doesn't change, just that she is frustrated with him and the demands being forced on them.

Nice job on the initimate scene, the way you wrote it made it clear that it wasn't so much a physical connection between them but something deeper emotionally.

Love takes many forms after all.

You know I love this! It's wonderfully written, especially for something concerning a subject matter you don't tend to write about and aren't 100% comfortable with _ You managed to make everyone sympathetic, avoided making any conflicting love interests into cartoonish 'bad guys' like so many fics do. Basically, wonderful job!