Reviews for Callousness
P chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Quite heartbreaking. I feel truly sorry for Charity, she's just a very minor character, but I have always assumed she must have been a sweet person. Very well-written story. I feel so bad for Severus too; his role as the spy has prevented him from making true friendships with the Hogwarts staff, and I somehow always liked to think that Charity would have been among those who have tried to be his friend.
snarky Beth chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I felt it too, watching that scene unfold. That there was something between them, that Snape regretted her suffering. It made me wonder what their relationship was like… Nice writing :).
notafanfic2 chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
I totally agree

There were so many little moments in the film that would be great to write about

I'm pretty much just home from watching it and had to log to see if anyone else had noticed

I'm so happy you did too

That was really good and captured the moment so well

Well done D
TenIsTHEDoctor chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
This was so amazing. I went to the midnight premiere and this scene kind of broke my heart a bit. Call me crazy but I swear I could see a tinsy bit of sadness in Sev's eyes when they floated her over the table. Which is why I absolutely had to come and check if anybody wrote some Severus/Charity friendship/romance fics. Yay for you and the others I found! :D Great job! I loved it!

xoxo Much Love, Britt
Progress Not Perfection Lovely chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Beautiful. Simply beautiful, and so well written. Thank you for posting this :)