Reviews for On Reflection
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2018
Wow, this captures the innocence and the ingenuity of the Mr Saturns! It's easy to forget in all the silly grammar and eccentric behavior that they are really smart!

Have to wonder if they helped fasaad become clanky, or whether that was Dr Andonauts himself
BabyCharmander chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Just beat this game last night and was hoping to find some good fanfiction. I was not disappointed! You seem to write Duster pretty well, and the Mr. Saturns were spot-on. I really liked the last line in particular.

Only criticism I can come up with is that the Fearbot's description does say that its stories don't have much of an effect on humans, but that's not so big a deal. Otherwise, good work!