I doubt u even remember this fic but I do hope u come back to it someday, whenever I’m feeling down I come here for a laugh, I know u have life problems and u mentioned how hard it was for u to write but with how amazing that past 7 chapters have been I honestly think u don’t have much to worry about

There are so many wrong things with this chapter that it feels just like something that could happen in canon which says a lot about how twisted this series is.

Come on Zig update this art already

The only thing I'm disappointing about is that I went into this story about bros doing bro things and I didn't get nearly enough Hamazura. I mean, more Delta squad Accelerator shenanigans is amazing but the fact that you didn't include nearly enough Hamazura disappoints me greatly. But maybe that's just me. Otherwise, this story is pretty amazing, you portray both the Delta Squad and Accelerator extremely well. And while the pacing and rhythm of the story can be very sporadic with the focus of a hyperactive squirrel, I am an ADHD squirrel and am capable of following it well enough for the humor to get through...Just add more Hamazura please. Then it'll be perfect.

Stop being dead and update already sheesh.
There really should be some sort of item that sends a notice to social media and other accounts when someone actually dies so we don't have to deal with this 'will they update or not' and get on with our shitty lives.

KUBOism gets me every time. Wow.

Please MORE

Man, looking over this story reminds me of why I liked the ToAru setting long before it became a game of unceasingly dumb escalation that used Kamijou as an excuse to introduce the latest nonsensical elements to the reader for world building purposes.

Know this.

Your humor in this fic has been unceasingly on this point. I hope to see a continuation sometime soon, and that whatever rough patch has eaten you up hasn't returned to drag you back down. Thanks for writing this.

Keep up the good work

I finally finished it. Got side tracked by several other fics doing the Xmas update thing, as well as starting on a 800 page long quest thread on SV. And I have to say...
Your opinion, that your writing is shit? That opinion is BS. This is one of the best humor pieces I've seen in recent times. Between the excellent delivery of contrasting serious and silly moments (the condom scene I mentioned earlier), and reusing the same set up to deliver 4 different brick jokes takes talent.
If you really have a hard time writing humor since your jokes stop being funny to you, get a beta reader, maybe? They'll have an unbiased opinion on the rest of the chapter, too.

Finally, don't worry, Himegami! I noticed you! Funnily enough, a certain Mental out didn't, despite having a mind based power that can most likely be used as a brain radar.

Oh my God. So much laughs... 'Commando'... Hehehe.
On another note... With all due respect to Pierce (great scene you did with him, making his predicament seem silly, but secretly carrying that kind of meaning), aren't condoms perishable goods?

Reading it now, with more knowledge of canon, I see more bits that might have slipped me last time.

Now, on my 2nd reading, I realize just how much foreshadowing this has...

I wasn't notified that this was updated. I was lucky to find out by skimming through my favorite list. I'll have the person in charge executed for this!

Just kidding.. Good to see this excellent story back in circulation. Hopefully to it's conclusions.

this is very funny and awesome. i just find this fic and i think its great
thanks for make this story