Brilliant.

Go Humour!

AU? Heh, clever!

this was amazingly written and so true to the characters. im so glad i found this fic! it was so funny loved how everything flowed and gahhh just loved the whole fic!

Fang and Jayce should meet :D.

#$%, Elite! Why did you have to end it?

lawl :P Well, its come to an end. I kinda wish there was moooooore. Not that I really care about the students from AU(Aeris, Zell) but I would like to see what their reactions were to Lightning. And Fang. And see what Light chose to do after.. hmm

I shall go check out moooooreee now. Thanks for the awesome story :D

Bwahahaha, Operation ROFL. That's priceless xD Now.. ACTION!

...this next chapter could be depressing or awesome. Or depressingly awesome. o.o

Okay, so, I don't think my past reviews have been very analytical. Which is kinda weird for me, but then I like to just get lost in the stories..

But anyway, I wanna say that I really do enjoy your story. I don't like comments that say how ooc characters are or how it deviates from the plot. Its a fanfic. derp. In my opinion, they are just a deeper look into the world of the game. I love the way the characters develop(for the most part, still can't get used to the new Light-Claire- Tonnere(?)) I'm gonna be sad when I finish reading this though. And I really did enjoy all of your story thus far. Even the angsty ones. Angst can be great, and it just makes the happy happier :D

Nabaat. The bitch. Hmm... maybe I'll read a fic about her.. if there are any. Could be interesting. Action-y chapter next? :D

Good chapter, but depressing in a different way. To be really nerdy, it's like Light is a phoenix and just kinda was completely reborn.. Well, she threw away 'Lightning' which was really depressing. But then she finally comes to terms with shit.. but still... not even the gunblade.. :c Looks like stuff is getting more interestin too. Time to read on!

So much emotion in this. Maybe its because I feel so tied to the characters or maybe your writing just rocks my proverbial socks hardcore. Listening to My Hands by Leona Lewis pretty much everytime I read your story, it fits. And makes it that much more emotional. I would listen to T Swift, but too many bad connections :P The quotes from the songs though are really.. fitting I guess. Gonna move on and hope for a happy ending now.

Aww, as soon as I got to the present day part everything just got sad. Glad there was Jayce closure. And I do like the bit about Hope and Vanille. Mooooarrr

yay lil fluffiness :D

And there are very few things I love more than a well-written battle scene. I give ya props~

so, I didn't start the chapter yet, though I'll get to that. This story is a great look into Lightning's character and I reaqlly enjoy it, so, thanks for writing and posting, homeskillet _ But the reason I'm writing this review early is cuz I thought the what if song title dealio is awesome. Jussayin.

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Hokay, chapter 4. I hope that it goes back to Jayce and Light. I wanna see whow that ends.. which is weird, cuz I totally started this story like.. 'WANT MOAR FANG. MOOOAR' but I like yer style, kid and plan on reading whatever else ya got! After this story, of course. So.. keep writing? :D

For your 1st story,it's not bad.. But their 'moments' are too short! I'd like to see what's Aeris them reaction to Claire being Lightning too.. I hope a sequel comes including Lightning's AU's friends..