wow, still my fav writer. im glad i decided to reread your old fics

This is an awesome series. The part where Hellion took the beating... wow. Who known Laura can carry that kind of a grudge?! But they made up spectacular. I see now that you are pushing this into the X 23 series where Laura goes out into the world. But I hope she isn't alone.

And I hope that you update this terrific story to show that. : )

Delta808th

This is awesome! For the past few days I had midterms and every time I would finish early, I would read this! I love it xD are you planning to continue it?

Wilson meaning Deaspool? XD

Hay is fragile over with

Another good chapter, well done

I really like how well you write Hellion as a character.

It seems that Marvel started to hate Hellion for some reason... like seriously, EX. Wolverine and the X-Men undoes several issues of his Character Development in a few panels! Then the X-23 series completely destroys one of the plots of the New X-Men comics (ANGER FACE.)

Back to my original point; really enjoying the story and glad the Hellion and Laura have a good writer, it's better than the canon

his reaches up her skirt and moves her underwear to the side, spends a few moments with his fingers, playing around with her folds and randomly releasing energy (which make her growl slightly, her hands gripping his shirt); then he pulls her down. They both arch their backs in satisfaction; he pulls her down and they kiss, deeper than they have for a long time. Laura makes a small noise against his lips, and for a moment he's completely happy. Sweet

In a way…I was kinda hoping that you'd notice me…and the fact that I was leading people. That wasa kind of leading, considering I managed to lead most of them into excluding you."

Laura wrinkles her nose, but she eyes the boy. She knows he does not think this way now, and that he is being honest, which is one quality she values deeply about him. "I do not know these things unless you tell me," she murmurs. "I thought you believed I was an…abomination. That I was...flawed and inadequate."

"Yeah, that's kind of the angle I went for, isn't it?" Julian rubs his neck. "I had no idea you were raised in a cell, Laura. I thought you'd kind of get things. Well, I'm sorry it went down that way." whoa glad he apologized

This was the first story I ever read on Fan Fiction and it's still as wonderful as the first time I read it.

Thank you for updating!

I much prefer this story to the canon story of them

and I was severely disappointed with the ending of X-23 # 19

F U Liu!

I really enjoyed how Laura beat the crap out of Julian... even though he could have protected himself but didn't for her sake

Well Done.

Thank you very much for the update!

P.S. I really needed some Helix fanfiction therapy after the crappy ending of X-23 #19.

"SHELTERED?" he roars back. "I've nearly DIED about six times since I came here!" As much as a deathtrap the school and Utopia are, it's more dangerous on the outside world for mutants

on her behind HA

"If you don't care about me anymore…if you really don't feel anything for me…that's fine. I won't force you into something you don't want. Even so, I'm not letting you do this alone. You're my friend, Laura…my best friend. I stand by my friends, even when they have to do shit that sucks."

That was so AWESOME!

He realizes he's going to have his $$ handed to him by his girlfriend, in public no less. He feels a thrill of fear HA

Awesome Rogue

Laura and Julian forever

Thanks for the update!

I wonder how many of Laura's memories are lost with trigger scene.

I thought Logan thought of Laura as more like a sister

Deadpool isn't a mutant his powers come from splicing Logan's healing factor he was a normal human

Alright no more trigger but why is she lost and confused guess I'll have to wait to find out

Yeah I hate how it implies an us or them rather than us AND them

"Yes, I am. You didn't save Laura last time…or the time before that…or the time before that." Awesome

Andrew Rice? His name was Zander, wasn't it? o_O

Sofia again... I like it when Julian feels confused )

"Too bad I don't work for the facility anymore." - Teh DRAMA! God, poor Laura. Hope Wade will leave The Dark Side soon.

What's with your Prisoner series, Snff II? Any plans? Ah want moarrrr... Going to read 7th chapter of Everything To Lose now. Hey, wait... Playboy Mommy updated? Save Your Breath III (I need to read the previous two now)? HOORAY! I love you so much ))

P. S. "What I've Done" song rules!