oh my goodness this is freaking AMAZING
my brain cant even worry about grammar its so amazing
i really hope you made a sequel

loved it
not usually a fan of bori, but this was really sweet
my main question is: what are their classmates doing during all of this? Aren't they in the middle of a school hallway, by Tori's locker, which is near one of the most trafficked areas of the school?

Whoa this was...intense!

wow that was really good, this is the victorious story i've read and now thanks to you i want to read more. are you going to add on anymore chapters? it would be really great if you did, i'm looking out for anymore chapters from now on. xx

Great way to have Bori get together mainly through Beck's eyes.

Nicely done!

Update ... I think the eyes belong to Jade ?

Very intense, sweet and romantic !

I bet ya every girl wants to hear a guy say this

And do this :) thumbs up !

Wanna see where this goes

Interesting...

love this! the effort you put into it definitely shows! i love your characterization of Beck, i think it was really spot on. fantastic job! :)

-caitlin

I'm not sure what words would inspire you to continue this story,

But whatever the words are that you're looking for, this all I can give.

So, please. Just finish the gosh darn story :)

Whoa...that was HOT! You should totally make a sequel, a one-shot sequel, i love those but its YOUR story you make it how you want :)

Let me guess, Jade was watching them. That's kinda disturbing, even for her. I do like Tori and Beck together, they're cute! I think it would be cool if you continued this.

~Xela

that'd be so cool to have a sequal

I loved this story :) I really hope there's a sequel or continuation ! But keep it beck and Tori :) their so cute together