You have some really different elements in this story. I have really enjoyed it. I think I like your Alice best. I hope you continue the tale. I would love to see where you take this. I also look forward to exploring the Alice Alec connection/dynamic more. Thanks for the words.

SAVRAV,

Where have you gone? We need our fix! Life is hell sometimes but please help a girl out here, please get your head back in the story. If you need help just shout out!

sapho99

Great story another update soon I hope.

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;D smexin in the wood's & the movies ****

:) so Jacob's a wolf & Ed'd human ?

:D x2

;D need I say more ?

OMG! such a lot of info to take in. Alice is still doesn't seem to be completely honest. Damn, I never expected Bella to be so stupid, she doesn't believe Alice but she does believe Alec! I am still holding out for a HEA for Edward and Bella;)

Love it! Update soon!

"I will tell you all you need to know" Hmmmm! So Alice is pretty much being pushed into a corner because of her deceit, keeping very important things from everyone, but she's still trying to hold on to the secrecy:( Just spit it out Alice! I can't wait to find out why she's done this!

LOL Emmett's a knucklehead::)) "Afro" LOL

If Bella had asked me I would have told her a vampire would find her when she left the house! Alice didn't see this? 1st thing Bella should do after her change is punch Alice in the throat like she thought about earlier in the chapter::))

Oh no you didn't! You turned Bella into her typical stupid human idiot self:( Can't believe you would end this chapter at a point where I'm pissed off Idiotella:( LOL

Oh man you and your fricking cliffies. I really wish she would have listened to Alice but then again Alice should have been upfront on everything in the first place and they wouldn't be having these problems.

Love it

Bella is being critical of everybody else but she herself is no better as she shows such stupidity.

Not really liking where this is heading. Say goodbye cause you lost a reader.