Wow... Absolutely amazing job in the descriptions!

Great story! You know when first starting to read this I was thinking it would be a one shot lol but I was so pleased to see that it wasn't. This was such a good story full of mystery and excitement. I wish he could have brought Fred back but at the same time I liked how it ended. :) Great job!

They could have easily obliverated her also Rita is scared of Hermione because of the stuff she's done. Why is she doing this now? Now Hermione can get her fired by telling everyone what she truly is. Wow I'm just ranomling nonsense sorry.

On a completely different note I love your story and it's amazing and different.

I can't believe it actually over... :(

I SEE THE TWILIGHT REFERENCE OOOH YOURE A GOOD ONE

lol I want Percy Jackson to pop up in this since its in Greece

George: *looks up* *sees Argo II* What the bloody hell...

Lol I want Percy Jackson to pop up in here somewhere since its in Greece.
George: *looks up* *sees Argo II flying* what the bloody hell..?

I SEE THE TWILIGHT REFERENCE IN HERE OOOOOH YOURE GOOD

WONDERFUL!

3 dis, it made me cry in the middle of the night. Sorry I havent been able to reveiw before, i was on an app on my ipad and am not allowed to get the real version. TY for the AWESOME story!

Dear Elven,
I have read this great story years ago,I have been deeply touched and now I'd like to translate it into Chinese if that's OK with you. I'll credit you fully and post the translation .com (registration-required). Thank you so much!

TerrieH
InnerMongolia,CHINA
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I dont agree with the way you portrayed the Weasleys in this chapter. they are perfectly aware of Rita and her quill and they shouldnt be such polite to her. they are great wizards, they could kick her out without telling her anything. I just dont think they could be helpless like this.

Of course this is happening in your head, George. But that diessn't mean I'm not real...

He he he. You heard nothing. Lol!

Good for him!