OMG! How is this rated T? EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW EW. It was VERY descriptive. Which is a bad thing. I mean, you're a good writer, but EW!

This was an adorable story! Loved it

"I shared a bed with Kendall for sixty seven nights and we didn't have to fight over the covers because we were happy being together and in that same bed we made love twenty four times and that's a lot of love"

I was just reading this book called "Before I die", and this is a line from page 302 of that book "We made love twenty-seven times and we shared a bed for sixty-two nights and that's a lot of love"

As soon as I read that line I knew I had read it somewhere before so I did a huge search and found this, one of my favorite fanfictions. Amazing, isn't it? That was a pretty good book, and I don't know if you stole it (nor care), but if this really was a coincidence I'd recommend that book.

Thanks for reading my ramblings, and goodbye.

Zeno it wasn't shitty it was cute

Lol they are such good actors James and Kendall

Wait... So the story's over now?

This had me crying, laughing, and squealing. All in one chapter. YOU ARE SO GOOD. The fight was perfect, the get-back-together was perfect, it was all perfect. I love it. :)

This whole story was absoultely beautiful.

I loved every aspect of it.

Complete perfection.

Seriously, the best story I've ever read.

I mean it.

Amazing.

I know you didn't think so either but I'm being completely honest here, this story was just... so real.

So sad but moving and it made me cry.

And I mean every part of this whole story, the first one, with weasly dole(sp?) And the other part where Kendall actually saved James and this. All so amazing.

I loved how you developed Kendall and James' relationship, how perfect, how complete you made them together, I absolutely love when Kendall wants to take care of James, exspecially when he sort of has a fetish with his thighs (so adorable yet a turn on...) and I just loved their relationship, it was perfect.

And oh my gosh, in the begining when Logan liked James, i just like when people like James and Kendall gets all posesive cause its so cute and erm.. hot? :P

And how he finally got over him and he and Carlos were together and this was all so so sad and perfect and I almost cried when Logan looked over at Carlos while they were still sitting in the crash... Then when Carlos almost didn't wake up, and then he couldn't move his legs... And how he fought with Logan, and he felt too needy and hated it... It was such a different side to Carlos and it was all so intense and heartbreaking... And then fight, the fake slap and the making up, so sweet... then the final chapter and its amazing fluffyness was the definition of perfection. Kendall and James were adorable and perfect, so how I would've pictured them, and Carlos was so cute and Logan was so sweet, making him dance, telling him he would never let him go... Just, AWWW! :]

This story (all the different parts, exspecially this one(As in boom)) was the best story I have ever, and probably will ever, read.

Your an amazing writer.

"I was trying to have a deep and meaningful then, and you ruined it. I was having a moment. You plus moment equals BOOM, moment gone." Logan jumped when James yelled "Boom" but couldn't help but laugh.

Well I couldn't stop laughing either xD (and that "fight in chapter 8 xD)

I love that story! (even the sad parts!)

Keep it on!

That was brilliant. I looooved it. The last chapter was not sh!tty. It was sweet and fluffy. Ur an amazing writer.

I didn't really realize this was a companion fic until you mentioned it in, like, chapter 4 or whatever. *facepalm* Xd

But I ADORED it! Not the accident and injury parts of course, but the love-y-ness of the whole thing. :D

I think it's really sad that people are plagiarising you. You're a wonderful writer.

It was a nice way to end it though.

Well done.

Agh, don't sell yourself short! This was a magnificent last chapter & a great way to end the story I thought. :)

Kames dancing AND Cargan dancing? Wow, a fangirl's dream come true! :D Carlos & Logan were too adorable in this. Carlos walking dancing with Logan "repaying" Logan Awwwwww & ahaha for that last one. XD

I see no point in trying to continue something if you feel like the story's already reached its climax. I totally respect your decision. But you will keep writing, yes? :D I certainly hope so because you're fantastic at it & I just adore the way you write Kames. :)

Aww. Well, you know you must be a great author if other people find your work worth claiming, right? But I'm sorry it happened to you again! :'( You don't deserve it. Ahaha, YEAH, Werewolfs & I shall kick some butt if you like. ;) & just to be doubly sure, it's not me is it? Because I know I said the whole, "It's me. Not him," line in one of my Kames fics which you also used in "In Your Embrace." I thought that line was amazing & I figured it was a little too broad to be the property of one person but if you want me to give credit to you just let me know & I will! Because you don't deserve this stress! :( & you always kind of scare me with those notices, ha. :)

I LOVE THIS FIC. You did an amazing job writing it. You are sososo talented! I love reading your works & I reallyreallyREALLY hope to see more from you in the future. Pretty please? :)

This is such a cute chapter! Aw, I wish it wasn't ending, could you maybe write a sequel?

just loved it! It made me want to cry and if it wasn't so early in the morning I would be right now!