how did he die? i'm confused

I wasn't too keen on the ending either, but everything else was brilliant. I thought the lemon was really interesting and which made the reactions to Tohma and Yuki's affair even more believable. Nice fic.

awee... i don't like that ending... xP

however it was really, really good. i was reading it in class and going "GAHHH" trying not to like laugh at things out loud and scream when things happened. and then i got home and read the ending. and teared. must be good, cause only good stories make me tear up. as a writer myself, i know. xP

good job. and very good oneshot. )

So sad so man tears