I just loved the whole thing especially the poem at the end, it was beautiful. Astounding job, you did their sibling relationship justice.

What am I supposed to do with these warm fuzzies now?
Adorable fic, nicely done!

This is great bonding you've got portrayed here. Well done!

This is really sweet and I really enjoyed this story and your perspective on Jazz's view of Danny.

That was amazing! Loved it! Now excuse me as I go in a corner to cry...

This. Was. So. Amazing.

This story is so sweet, it made me wanna cry. I actually did a little.

*claps*

Nitpick: You've got an extra "p" in operating.

HE'S IS NOT HER BABY BROTHER FOR GOODNESS SAKE IS IS 14! sorry to get huffy but come on!
i loved the story though that was awesome. a real reaction that i can beleive that almost never happens

This was pretty good, packed with emotion, I especially like that you added the poem in at the end.

Oh nice.

I love Danny and Jazz bonding pieces. Their relationship is so strong but so full of worry, on both sides.

Jazz's pov was really good and I think you did a great job of getting her worry across. I don't normally go for present tense, but it was effective here. And I really liked how you had a line of dialogue, then a short description of what she did, again and again. It really set up the way she was trying to stay calm even though she was really frantic inside.

I am really enjoying these...

Sapphireswimming

Post Scriptum- I liked the poem at the end too! :)

did he die? did he survive? What HAPPENED?

I liked it :)

This story deserves more reviews. I love those Danny/Jazz bonding fics. Majority of them sucks but your one of the best. Lovely poem by the way ;D

this better be continued