Loved your story! The world ending premise was an interesting one. I loved the gentleness between Jareth and Sarah. A very gentle love story, thank you!

aww that was so cute and very well written. i cried. yeah imma baby but it was so sweet and filled with love. bt yea its kinda scary to think the whole world-waged-war could really happen...you can bet if it does any time soon im going to the underground ;)

Such a sweet ending. Also I can totally roll with the sun rising in the west, that's very creative, and as an author, it's part of your artistic license.

This was enjoyable to read. Keep smiling. :-)

O.o brilliant! i love it. is there more?

Wow! This hooked me from the very beginning! I really hope to see an update soon! I am LOST in this story! Absolutely brilliant!

Interestingly done. Thanks for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

I like it. It's different, having Sarah's world literally fall down on her. I like the previous chapters as well as this one, I like that Jareth has his own place, it's an interesting thought, I just hope it won't be like other stories with random fae servants or family and the like. I like your writing style though and I like how you've done Sarah and Jareth's characters so far. Keep writing. :)

Enjoyable to read. Keep smiling. :-)

Interesting idea for a story! Looking forward to future chapters!