Reviews for First You Practice to Decieve
Vi-Violence chapter 7 . 1/1/2012
I think a sequel with them meeting Minion would be awesome!
AtemFan18 chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
haha "alien nonsence" very funny!
AtemFan18 chapter 2 . 4/24/2011
omg! roxie's father is so great! haha legal issues! funny! i liked it very much
AtemFan18 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
great! i loved the last part! kill people! yeah n_n
Fanghowl chapter 7 . 1/11/2011
This is the best Megamind fic so far and i have rad alot of it. It really well writen. Great plot action and in character.
angel raziella chapter 6 . 12/20/2010
That had to hurt. _
98Shaddowolff98 chapter 7 . 12/9/2010
Nice chapter. Well written. I love how the parents accept that he is an alien as well.
98Shaddowolff98 chapter 5 . 12/8/2010
Oooh! What will happen! I am LOVING this story!
98Shaddowolff98 chapter 3 . 12/8/2010
LOVE the Narnia reference in there! It's is a GREAT story. Thanks for the great read :)
kjhgsfgfgkflklllljlj chapter 4 . 12/7/2010
i know i said i'd only review once, but i had to mention that i loved that you mentioned Anastatia. *sigh* brings back old memories of a show i used to watch- discontinued now... there was an entire episode dedicated to her.
kjhgsfgfgkflklllljlj chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
why do i have the feeling that the last line was hinting at Toy Story XD anyway, love the story, i probably won't review again because i'm in a hurry, though.
Mia Vaan chapter 5 . 11/29/2010
I'm going to be completely honest with my review. This isn't a very believable plot.

Pretty much everyone in the world knows about Megamind and Metro Man. They know they're aliens who have taken on roles of superhero and supervillain; if things like studying aliens and such were possible in this fictional universe, both would have been sent off to the labs when they were infants.

Her family wouldn't act in this way, either. If the evidence is as clear as day, they would believe it and accept it (and since Roxanne is in danger, they would be concerned for her). They would also support her.

(And a little sidenote, Roxanne lived and grew up in Metro City; says so in the film)

This review may sound harsh, but I'm just trying to help. And believability is something a writer has to nail in their stories, otherwise it won't work. When you become a more experienced writer you just know when something doesn't sound right. Please, don't take this review the wrong way. I really think you have writing potential; you just need to practice and writing more believable stuff and your story will be a good one.
Viv Slvrdreamer chapter 3 . 11/28/2010
LOL do the cross over i really want to know what woddy and buzz would do to them
angel raziella chapter 7 . 11/24/2010
Awwwww! Why'd ya have to go and end it at 7 chapters? That was a really good fic? Any plans for a sequel?
Waifine chapter 2 . 11/22/2010
Awkward meeting with family is awkward! Can't wait to read more~
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