Awesome story! Really loved the story as well as the concept.
It was just soo good. Would have loved if this story progressed as a multi chapter fic..
Thanks for writing!
It was awesome.

So so good

So I thought this was a neat, interesting way to introduced C/S to each other. I think it's cool that Chuck was a spy before he met Sarah, and a good Agent at that.

You did an excellent job at revealing who Chuck and Sarah are, how they feel about their lives, and their current mission/seduction. Especially when they finally met and were each other's assignment. Heh. I was laughing at Chuck's babbling, so cute. Was glad he decided to stick with the honesty route. It was a nice surprise to hear that they had heard of one another before. I always felt that no matter what the circumstance or situation that C/S would hit it off in any meet-cute. And you proved it with this fic. :)

I was laughing when they both got a little butt-hurt once they found out they were eacth other's assignment. Again, swell job with the intro, and having C/S be partners post a...a la one-night stand. (?) Heehee. Makes me wonder how things turn out with the route you've given us. :) Thanks for sharing!

Great story! Really liked it!

Cool! Glad I followed an other writer's suggestion. Really dug this story. JT

Well, I'm so glad you didn't end in "Sure", but I'm positive that even if you did everybody would have still loved it.

Incredible story. Honestly. If Chuck were already a spy when he received the Intersect, this totally would have happened with him and Sarah. The show's premise is good, but I'd take this too if it's tweaked a little.

Just as I was contemplating going to sleep, I remembered my mental note to read this story that you mentioned earlier about Chuck and Sarah seducing each other. And I have to say - as much as I too think that John Mayer is a douche (to borrow from the US vocabulary) - I really enjoyed it. The idea is a great one and its very well written, particularly for a first fic!

I'm usually crap at writing reviews, but there are a lot of things I want to mention, so I'll try and get to them all. Sarah's race! That was a great idea. I originally thought it was Chuck see she was racing, but still, the way you ended it was brilliant. Chuck's "seduction" was really good, too. I definitely thought the way he had to kill his mark was worse, and you really captured the "chuck-ness" of it all, if that makes any sense. Really felt that Chuck was just tired of it all, so to speak.

And the Charah. The Charah seduction and dialogue was really sweet and well written. The way they sort of mentally (and physically, hehe) bonded, whilst both having a mutual disgust for what their job made them do was really powerful. I liked how they took solace it the fact that the connection they developed was genuine to both of them. Great ending, too. After the phone call with Graham, they both drop the super agent persona and return to just Chuck and Sarah - with Chuck respecting Sarah's modesty and Sarah dealing with the situation in a very, well, Sarah way. How they find each other at the end is great, too. Very little dialogue and just connecting on a pure *cringe for saying this* Chuck and Sarah level.

I think it deserves a sequel *wink*

Loved this! Really good AU, because even though Chuck wasn't the normal, bumbling nerd-herder we're used to, he was still completely in character, and it works so well in this story. The interactions between Chuck and Sarah are well-written and believable, and while I don't normally read or enjoy songfics, this worked well. Nice job!

This is a great story. really well written and you've managed to keep the characters true and real, and its got just the right balance of suspense with a Charah finish. almost perfect, but does it have to be complete?

Great story...have read it many times. Always believed that this was a story that you could have continued...

Great story! Very well-written. I usually don't read too many one-shots, but this one was excellent. And your first fic? It didn't seem like it! You should write more!

I know this is a one shot - but it would have been great to expand their relationship and story more, it's that good! Hope you write some more. :)

You are very talented you should try writting more stories!

A/N: thanks for the extra bit at the end. It made the story a whole lot better

Loved it! Great song choice and well written!

This was amazing! I mean the AU was just really really good! Chuck and Sarah were just perfectly angsty and spy-ish! I'm almost positive, scratch that, I AM POSITIVE that there is no other fanfic that has these same elements and the same inspiration for Sarah and Chuck's all spy characters! Also a plus was that I didn't find any spelling or grammar errors like I usually do, and I'm very good at finding those! All in all this was a very good piece of fiction. I applaud your writing talents NMH!