Honestly, I got chills after reading that third chapter, when everything clicked and fell into place. It just made a little too much sense. All those time travel mechanics and paradoxes have always been a step and a half beyond me, but it really turns into something amazing when done right. And this was definitely done right.

Not much to say past that. Your characterizations were spot on. The tone fit this fic nicely. The little details like Gokudera's ghost-gadgets not working on Yamamoto (as he turned out not to actually a ghost after all) really put a professional touch on this. One moment I found particularly striking was when Gokudera takes Yamamoto to see his body and then realizes why. It's a real marker for his belief.

All in all, this was a definite favorite, a 10/10 and a fantastic read.

Wow. This is so interesting! Amazing story, my friend. Simply amazing. Also, happy ending! Yay!

I had to reread it again, I think my head blew into pieces. BUT THANK THE HEAVENS. THE EPILOGUE. YES! They made it through after a lot of tries! I love this concept, the twists, the plot, the POV, how you kept them in character. Everything. I love it. Super.

This is so great!:) I'm so happy to find this rare gem! And you, with your artistic writing(I just scored how you wrote things in the parentheses, with the dashes and the unsuspected flashback merging to the the present) the story got even more amazing!

More power to you!

Ohmygod why do I like Yamamoto's POV ? Somehow it fits him, really fits him perfectly. I gotta praise you for that. I love this so much.

That was freaking awesome!
So I may be a tad overtired, but you had me almost sobbing at times there.
You, my dear, are talented.

I'm crying from this story. It was really upsetting but the epilogue made it all okay. Nice work :)

Gokudera and Yamamoto are the same! Going back into the past to change the present. The Ghost Yamamoto merged together with that Yamamoto to survive and have the knowledge of the snifers. Xd So adorable. Do they know the whole story now?

So, they're alive? They both Alive! They Alive! They both safe! They both life! They both breath and smile! YES, THEY ARE ALIVE!

THANKS GODNESS! GOD, I LOVE YOU!

HAPPY ENDING FOREVER! AND THANKS TO YOU IRIE SHOUICHI-KUN! o(TT-TT)o

Boggles the mind.

Such an amazing story! I think at one point, I was literally clutching my monitor and yelling in despair.

Great job; I loved how you wrote the characters, the plot twist-everything was fantastically done!

I loved what you did with this fic. I really did. But I think that this epilogue wasn't really necessary. I liked how you ended it in chapter 3-I thought that it was very dramatic but at the same time, it wasn't entirely tragic because there was the hope that it'll all work out in the end. But anyways, I loved this! Good job :)

It's funny when you think about it; Gokudera goes back in time to save Yamamoto when he went back in time to save Gokudera. Haha!

OMG. HOW THE HELL YOU CAME UP WITH THAT I WILL NEVER KNOW. But it was freaking epic. I have to say, it really was! Dayuuuuuum. This is awesome! I cannot even begin to explain how much I liked it! You write really well. When I read the climax, I almost kind of saw everything happening in my head. It was just really very dramatic.

I have to say, it was pretty confusing. How DID you come up with this kind of story? I'm curious. Haha.

Ahhh, brilliant~!

it would have been better if there was some fluff, or yaoi in the story, except for that i love it, i cried a lot! thank you and keep up the good work! :D

*cries* IT HAD A H-HAP-HAPPY E-ENDING! THANK Y-YOU J-J-JESUS!