Bella is such a damn bitch. Calling edward a liar the entire time, when she continuously lied to Jacob and could've broken things off and she probably wouldn't be in the crap she was in in the first place. Darn hypocrite. Don't get mad at someone for something you did yourself

I was wondering when
Jacob would be exposed for the sleezeball he is. If Ed and Bella would just slow down and talk maybe they would get their facts out in open before someone else is killed. The girl was trying to warn Bella about Jacob

WTF! I don't understand why either of them would be stupid enough to allow her to go back! Really annoyed .

She's one lucky b**** Edward probably had some influence with the cops she better not go back to Jacob quit your job

All I can say is that she's stupid for going and she deserves everything she's going to get there's no reason for her to go at all if it's because of her job f*** him and Edward being a cop she needs to listen to him

Great story! And yes, some people do read the little notes in your bio, so I'm pleased I found your other stories posted under KRay Cullen. I'm looking forward to read them all.

Loved this story. Thanks for your hard work in writing it.

Loved your story. Edward in this story is just like someone i love. It reminded me of him alot. and that made me love your story even more

Bella is the stupidest person on the planet! She deserves whatever she gets!

Great story!

This story was awesome, I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews! I really enjoyed reading this. You did a great job, you deserve more credit/reviews for it than you have right now. I almost didn't read it based on the name. I thought that it was going to be a story about gymward which I don't typically care for. I decided to read it anyway, hoping that there would truly be some twists and dark secrets other than a lot of weight lifting, treadmill running and generally a lot of gym related boring-ness. I'm glad it wasn't and that I did read it!

How big are we talking here on this pack tattoo? And the other I guess? I'm picturing some tiny one inch inconspicuous right on the hairline thing on Bella. It didn't seem to be too much of a worry to anyone other than it's meaning...you may have said somewhere and I missed it, but either way I missed it and I'm dying to know because I can't believe the reaction. Permanent. Ink. On. Skin. Of some shitty symbol. Forget being concerned about being locked up and a prisoner, I'd cry more over the tattoo, cuz that's how I roll! ; )

this story deserves more reviews, loved it !

I wonder about Embry now. He doesn't seem like a bad guy. I wonder if the reason why Jared didn't kill Kim was because Embry said or did something? Idk I'll just have to keep reading. But everytime Embry is brought up ts seems like he's always doing something nice.

Bella is stupid _

I wonder about Embry now. He doesn't seem like a bad guy. I wonder if the reason why Jared didn't kill Kim was because Embry said or did something? Idk I'll just have to keep reading. But everytime Embry is brought up ts seems like he's always doing something nice.