| Reviews for Connection |
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   Make Me Laugh012 chapter 10 . 7/19/2011 cant wait to read your other story! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 9 . 7/19/2011 naw! i love this story! :) |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 8 . 7/19/2011 ooohh! i love the superpowers! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 7 . 7/19/2011 ha! i love Ginny's temper! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 6 . 7/19/2011 aw! i love your story! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 5 . 7/19/2011 wow! this story is so cool! :) |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 4 . 7/19/2011 OMG! i cant wait to find out what happens next! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 3 . 7/19/2011 Cant wait to see where Ginny and Draco's relationship goes! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 2 . 7/19/2011 Can't wait to read more! |
| Make Me Laugh012 chapter 1 . 7/19/2011 wow! great start! |
| cherryripe169 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011 erfngskamrfng this is sooooo good, I really like the mind connection idea. Please submit the next chappie soooon D: all i can say is maybe a little bit more description of the setting of the story would be good, and more description ofthe feelings/emotions of the characters ? but i loooooooooooooved the accidental Crucio thing, and the glowing colours cause of the strong emotions, that was great! keep it up beb! ur amazingg emmy-bee :) |
| Harrypotter202abc chapter 9 . 1/30/2011 Hey! I like it, a little Drinny action going on! i still think the mind connection thing is WAY cool! Oh, and the fact that their relationship is slowly developing instead of them just jumping at each other. Always, Harrypotter202abc |
| imadoodlenoodle chapter 3 . 1/30/2011 I think you need to be careful with your characterisation of Ginny and Draco, both of them at the moment seem a bit, well, weak to be honest. If their names weren't there I wouldn't know who they were. Just remember what Draco is like in the books, a horrid child who sneers and smirks. Now, he doesn't have to stay like that, *but* he can't not be like that in the first place. He needs to be changed slowly - believably. Your writing is pretty good, though I would just double check through the chapters before posting to try and get rid of tiny little mistakes. [Really good first story. :)] - Sarah |
| Betrayed soul chapter 9 . 1/30/2011 WAY to short for my likeing! i need to know more! plz have the next one out soon! im going nuts not knowing! |
| Betrayed soul chapter 8 . 1/28/2011 well... all i can say is... HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CAHPPIE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! U gotta get another one up before school goes back so u have 2 days! |
