And? What happens next? I’m so excited to hear the rest of the story please don’t leave it forever!

this is so cool hope the new one comes soon

I'm really enjoying this story and noticed you hadn't updated it in a while. Please keep it up! I love it!

Please please please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great story keep up the good work :)

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Wha..? Who...? What next?

FINISH PLEASE! DYING OF SUSPENSE!

Seriously, please update soon before I completely lose it...lol. I love your writing :)

Eerie! Out of total curiosity, and this is probably cause I've watched the other movies so many times, in there going to be any transformation magic involved? Just curious...keep up the good work!

I love how the darker this story gets, the more information we get regarding this mysterious figure. It's interesting how you incorporated not only Odette's, but Derek's vulnerable side as well through this story. To make a long story short; brilliant chapter to a equally brilliant story. Hope you update soon ;D

Awesome chapter! Glad you finally updated! :)

i like it :)

Creepy but very well written! I like how strong you made Odette, and how they are a team

Funny how everything always comes down to Rothbart:) Again love the semi horror/mystery edge you give this story, so intriguing. I LOVE IT!Please update soon, this is turning out to be a fantastic story.

Awesome! Loved this chapter! :D

So good, so full of suspicion. Is it a ghost, is it Rothbart coming back from the dead? The chapter was indeed a brilliant one, filled with drama, passion, death, and a mysterious voice. So amazing, beautifully written as alway, great chapter; I loved it. Please update soon, and cure my curiosity.

aweesomee :)))

oooh can't wait to see what happens next! :)