A great fanfic. Terrific writing. Tiva forever.

Loved it

Was this written before "I couldn't live without"? I thought not, right?
Normally I would be scared away by your intro with the based upon a song thing, but I'm glad I sticked with it.
Good first chapter! Too bad that there were a couple of sentences that could use some improvement.
Will continue now with the other chapters.

Never read this one before now I did and it's beautiful! Loved it!

I was going to be like MORE! but then I realized you had 6 other chapters so I can't wait to read them!

Aawh.. That's so sweet! I love it! :D

LOVE LOVE LOVE! Great work! I like how there was tiva in it but also the father/daughter relationship between her and Gibbs. Great work!

Keely :)

SUPER AWESOME FIC!

well i must say that was a good job my freind. Sad to see a story end but it was a good story.

Draco122

this was great, i loved it. a few mistakes made it hard to read, maybe consider getting a beta for your next story. either way i loved the whole story, excellent work. :D

This chapter brings to mind "All I Wanna do is Make Love to You" by Heart (you know, a rock group from the '80s).

Love this story, too.

Well, dear if you stop it there than you leave open the possibility of a sequel. Now that Eli is at least for the moment out of the picture the future must come to pass. When will Ziva finally tell both Gibbs and Tony everything she went through? How will they take it? Will the ultimate act of healing in this case a new life come to pass? Where will Ziva and Tony go from here?

Thanks for writing this, beautiful ending...

Gotta catch up on reading your other stories, cause I really like your writing style.

i loved the ending and pleeeeeeeeeease write a sequel

ok that was epic. I loved every second of it. Nice job

Draco122