So this is where my favorite Courier came from. What a great start for a great character. I love the interaction between her and Silus, she's so intense and love seeing Silus rattled. Love this story, its going in my favorites.

Hehe, wow, this is really good. The interrogation was an interesting little mission, and while I wasn't exactly fascinated by either Boyd or Silus while playing, you've kinda changed that. You include some really nice details that flesh out the story without making it boring. And the way you handle the interrogation itself - the power armor being the wild card that makes Silus cave - is a good fit. Lets Silus be a hardened Legion soldier who can handle usual torture methods while still allowing the NCR to get some information out of him. And the added hint of...something...between Silus and Boyd is a great final touch. Even though they're sort of on opposite ends of the spectrum, and have totally different ideals and loyalties, they connect on a personal level so that they actually come to care about each other's well-being. It's nice when it's not simple good vs. evil, Army A vs. Army B.

Somehow I knew someone would write a fanfic about that mission...Thank you for doing it so well!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, though I personally prefer tricking Caesar into thinking you're Legion and getting him to spill.

I look forward to any future NV works.

I'm pretty impressed. I love how you gave more insight to Boyd and Silus' characters. It's always really refreshing to see other people's perspective on this game!

Very well written! I have always wonder what the Legion think about you if you interact with them as a female. It properly added to their humiliation that they got their sexist ass kicked by someone that they view as weak and inferior.

I really enjoyed reading this! Keep up the good work!