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Nice first chapter! I liked the dialoque, it flowed well. Though, when the guy says "quid agis" i think you meant to say "who are you" in Latin, not "How are you" which is what Quid Agis means. :) (quid agis-how are you)
anyway, thats the only thing I noticed. (3 years of Latin... 2 more i am going to take next year fall.)
so...im going to finish reading, thanks for sharing your work! There are not a lot of Percy/Amnesia stories, only Annabeth, so this is nice. :)
-Ava

Cheesy, I'm a critic

Dakota is a boy

Too cheesy, cliche, trite, and super cringy. Plus Reyna is way out of character

Jeez Reyna is the daughter of Bellona, get your facts straight

Hey, I've only read about 11 chapters yet but there's a spelling mistake you've repeated multiple times that I'd like to point out.
You tend to say "diffidently" when I think you mean "definitely". They're two very different words with very different meanings and "diffidently" means "modestly" and doesn't really fit in the sentences you've put it in.
Otherwise, this story is going pretty great! Good work. Keep it up

This chapter was great! But can you please finish the book? Please?

Is Geb... Egyptian?
God of the Earth or something like that? O.o

Oh my Gods! This is such an amazing story! You are a super talented writer! Have some cookies as a reward! (::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)(::)
Please update sooooon! But no pressure. And the story is ending soon? Noooooooo! It's so good that I never want it to end! :)

This story has some epically good descriptions and I LOVE IT! Ne thing though: it's not tong. It's actually spelled tongue. :)

I love it! This really rocks!

Coolness! Really like this story!

& I know this sounds stupid, but really I laughed when Percy said he had a weed problem. Loudly. I got some strange looks.D

You probably didn't mean for that to be a joke... Oh well ;)

Please update soon :D!

Does Terra have to do anything with Gaia?

Cause Terra is the Roman version of Gaia o.O

Hmmmm... :)

Really enjoying the story so far! Good job!

Isn't Geb from the Kane chronicles?...

I'm sorry but I couldn't stand it any longer. It's spelled Definitely! Please don't spell it the other way!