I cannot even form words! This is so beautifully written! It's not often you find an Artemis Fowl fanfiction that, not only is brilliantly written, but also completely in character. AND ON TOP OF THAT a brilliant plot line. :) thank you for spending your time in writing this.

I'm in love. Completely and totally. Your writing has captured my mind and soul! This. Is. BRILLIANT!

Very well written!

Please continue this story it is very good

Love this, so please update when you can. :)

If there's one thing I love about your writing style, it's how clear and concise you manage to come through. Too many authors seem obsessed with giving you every last detail, to the point where it clutters up the story in a bunch of useless junk that does nothing but stop the fic in its tracks. You always seem to be able to give just enough to give us an idea of the thoughts and emotions going into the scene, but you don't bog it down with a load of unneeded trash. Your banter (although there might not have been a whole lot this chapter) is as witty and fun as ever. Your exposition comes through smoothly and keeps the story flowing without feeling like fluff to pad it out, or feeling like it's going into far more detail than would be ever necessary. So! All in all, it's nice to see you are alive and that this is still being worked on, and (as always) I wholeheartedly look forward to your future projects, be they more of this, or something else!

I absolutely enjoyed your brilliant way of writing. It's so original you'd think it's Colfer. Everyone was in-character and you got Artemis's speech and actions just right. I can't wait for an update! This is exciting!

Love your writing style so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Mrs Midnight

Congrats, Foaly! Now, you just have to get information out of an old sprite with no memory of the experience :P

Love this chapter! And you brought Root in! :D And I love how you've got Artemis trying to track his past self while the LEP is trying to track Artemis track his past self and perfection!

(sorry, I'm in a fangirly mood)

GAaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh, I love this story so far!

I am LOVING this. Especially Foaly. He's my favourite character ever and the way you portrayed him was brilliant. Thank you.

So glad this isn't abandoned, I love it :D

Now the plot is getting in motion. Eee...

And it's a very good exploration of Everything that Went Unexplained. Everyone is perfectly in-character (except Artemis, kind of, and that's the whole point).

...Spiro. Frick.

Hm. Well. ...This is great. I just hope this fic isn't as dead as it looks...

Great job! Awesomely written!