On my fuck that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Sooooooooooo fucking hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooootttttttttttttttttttt! Loved it. So much write more.

My gawwwwwdddddddd i fucking loved it it. Uterly loved it. Damn right loved itttttttttt

Serously I've never read such good threesome like yours before of these three, your writing is really phenomenal

Mmmm very...entertaining. Loved it

Did you get this from the Sex Therapist manga?

this was super good :) some of the best stories come from dreams

Shiro was so ravished x3

That was hot.

luv luv LLLUUUUVVVVV this

This is really great...I totally love it but you need to work on your spelling...I understand what you mean but it is kinda annoying/distracting to decipher it, especially when reading something interesting. Other than the spelling, it's really well written!

I love it! The atmosphere is just so wonderful! Between dream and reality, we're a bit lost and your writing style matches perfectly with the topic!

Good job and thanks a lot for it!

Crazyitachi~

i love this it something that most people wouldent think of ] great idea and great writing style

I love this! It was perfect

Droooooooool...

Although I don't usually like a seme-ish Ichi, that was extremely sexy. I like how you made him sensual, but not too slutty; he still had class, which I like. I usually try to avoid Lemons where the uke is the pushy one (I'm weird, I know), but you pulled this off beautifully .

Nicely written, in character, and as usual, drool-inducing.

~Tainted Rhapsody~

That was fucking amazing! My Gosh, I swear you must be trying to kill me with the amount of hotness. GrimmIchiHichi nnngngghhh.

LOVE IT!

So wish this wasn't a one shot. So much potential for continuing.

Gah.

Loved it, love yer writing style too.