You left much to the imagination! This was funny.

... I think England should hit him. Seriously. xD

For your first fic in English, its a great job! D

See ya!

this was awesome, write more plz! X3

Hahahahahaha! xD

I liked! Alfred was annoying Arthur too much! xD I know they like each other, y'know? huhuh...

Write more in English, ok? :D

KISS XD

"What are you reading, Arthie?" "… Twilight." "WHAT?", lol i love that part. For your first fic english you did a great job!

I don't mind helping a bit with English. x3 I love the part when Arthur was reading Twilight and Alfred screamed, "WHAT?" xDDDD