| Reviews for For the Love of Metro Man! |
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   Memory25 chapter 2 . 8/31/2013 Oh god. SPACING. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/10/2012 I like it, maybe a few touches of critique and editing here and there, but all in all, very good! |
| Boredom Queen of Insanity chapter 3 . 5/23/2011 I love this! There are far too few Metro Man stories out there. Besides the 'having two people talk in the same paragraph'mistake, which is quite common, I think its awesome! Short and sweet is the way for me! Anyways, I hope you update! Soon hopefully! (and sorry for any spelling errors of my own, no spell check on my phone!) |
| Boredom Queen of Insanity chapter 3 . 5/23/2011 I love this! There are far too few Metro Man stories out there. Besides the 'having two people talk in the same paragraph'mistake, which is quite common, I think its awesome! Short and sweet is the way for me! Anyways, I hope you update! Soon hopefully! (and sorry for any spelling errors of my own, no spell check on my phone!) |
| Elssie chapter 3 . 3/7/2011 It's short and sweet so far! But I want more! Please? :P |
| asdfdbfnmfdbm chapter 3 . 2/27/2011 LOVED IT :D Plllleeeeeassssse continue...please |
| Netbug-Archive chapter 2 . 11/21/2010 I see a lot of new writers make this mistake; you shouldn't have two characters with dialog in the same paragraph. If a different character talks, you need to start a new one. Right now this is a text wall and it's confusing to the reader. |
| fanfictionweirdo chapter 3 . 11/14/2010 Love your story! Please continue! |
