Love it! It was very well-written. I enjoyed seeing the brothers through Tamina's eyes, and her dismay at the realization that Dastan might no longer be a marriageable option.

Very well written. You use the small details well in illustrating bigger things that were not so noticeable before.

Wow this is an angle i never imagined happening but truly is possible and interesting to read. So in sync with the characters as well. A great job of writing this piece. Truly enjoyed it

simply beautiful! loved how you wrote the brothers and made tamina wise enough to follow through her own beliefs

Very sweet.

Wise and understanding p.s I think the warrior dude likes tamina

I love this! Such a lovely reflection on the relationship between the princes.

Ah siblings. Someone you will tease incessantly then defend selflessly should someone else try to hurt them.

Or as I actually told someone once: "No once messes with my brother, except me!"

Well done.

A carefully-crafted story with a nice supply of detail. Well done (:

I have read this story many times and every time I am impressed by it.

This was amazing! I loved it. :) Bravo!

I love it. :] So cute.

Lots of love,

Allie[:

Phew! No war!

Fantastic story - you truely captured the characters well - nicely written. :)

I like your restrained writing style. And the story line.

You present us the Dastan Tamina relationship in very well written scenes. Thank you.