Can I just say how much I love this story? I'm halfway through the second du through of fable 3, and the entire time I've been thinking that there needs to be an option to romance the handsome soldier...

Well, I guess that's why we have fanfic! Keep this up and I look forward to reading more!

I absolutely love this damned story

I think I squealed when I saw the email that this chapter had been published. It may have been short, but that's got nothing on the content. I'm not even one for smut, and yet here I am, trying not to enjoy this chapter as much as I did.
I'm in love with this story.

You are an angel. I've been absolutely pining for a Princess/Ben Finn fic like this, a sort of slow-ish burn with all the right characterization and more importantly, LOTS OF BEN. This is exactly what I've been looking for since I booted up my copy of Fable 3 again last month. Never stop writing, whether it be this story or anything else. Just keep doing it, because you're very, very good at it!

are you gonna update again this is bloody great

I love this! :D One of the best Fable 3 stories there is! I do have to say though.. You sorta should have made the part where she got shot longer... *winces* *opens eyes and finds that she isn't hitting her with a bat* um.. I just.. Parts like that need to be overdone and drawn out. I'm not bagging on you, I literally just saying. :D awesome story.

Lots of Love and Support,
Queen of Albion, Elizabeth

:) A happily Ever After :)

I liked this; so sweet and romantic, and I actually felt as if you were having Rina seriously considering taking Reaver as a lover! I'm glad I was mistaken!

I'm not a huge Ben Finn fan, but I do like him. This story of yours made me change my mind and adore him, tho! :)

I'm so glad that your accompanying artwork indeed did not prove to be fatal to Rina! She took two bullets and survived. I know she's a Hero, but still, it could have turned out badly.

I liked the shifting POV's. I'm confused about how Rose has a son, tho. I'll have to re-read! I'm tired right now and my brain is a bit muddled.

Thank you for a VERY enjoyable story!

She jumped in th eway, didn't she? Yeah, she jumped in the way

pretty good so far keep it up and more please :)

I can say for sure this chapter makes me have an imaginary nosebleed (seeing as I've never gotten one and thus can't get them from emotion alone), my face turn red, and want to laugh hysterically all at the same time. As for the rating, all I can say is...K only fits for this were it from Japan. ;) You may want to adjust that. I think it'd be pretty nice if you went a bit deeper in detail. You only skim over the surface and don't go further in. I know for a fact you could go more in-depth. I saw an error or two in grammar/spelling, but they aren't very noticeable, so I wouldn't worry too much. Still, it's really good compared to mine, especially since I hit the brick wall that is Writer's Block headfirst. That, and I just plain hate my work. I write down a chapter and proceed to print it out just to rip it up. Keep going. Don't be a failure like me. You have a much better shot at this.

THAT'S IT? Where is the depth? Where is the DRAMA? WHY IS THE PART WHERE THE PRINCESS GET SHOT ONLY A PARAGRAPH LONG? IT SHOULD BE A GAZILLLION WORDS!

Oh i love it! very good story and very well written. Keep up the awesome work.

Just read the whole story and I must say I really enjoyed it! Well written and romantic :)

Wow! Reall romantic and beautiful. (Dreamy sigh)

Good job. Great words