Well-written. Very original idea.

Truly original POV and very nice atmosphere. Nice!

XD ahahahaha! This is hilarious! Totally luv Squirrel's POV. Nicely done.

Nicely done.

Ahh Charon always scaring off the raiders.

It was really cool hearing it from squirrels point of view ]

Delightful. Maybe not the best word, but none other fits. Although, you did change from Squirrel to Apple in one instance, which totally threw me off, but the story was fine enough in it's stead. I'm now going to gander at your other works. I'm kind of worried at LW's lack of concern about having something poke through her belly, as you described, and I'm afraid I didn't really understand what you were getting at. But I have been up for three days straight and am jittery with a coffee buzz, and that could be the reason. Her pelvis would prevent even a three foot dick from doing anything like a scene from Aliens. Although, she would probably cramp something awful... I need sleep. Have a wonderful night, loved your story.

I'm such a fan of your stories! Love the new point of view, makes for a very interesting story.

Love the new point of view. Good job!

Well at first nice name for stoory Doll ;P and the second of all I liiked, when ya put the storys perspective into raider. It was something neeeew

Keep writing Beautyfull. I have sayed already and I'll say it again: Love your storyes Daaarling ;