Reviews for Something about love
Debbie Hicks chapter 21 . 9/12
22. Chapter 22.
B's pov
suddenly felt from him myself as his imzadi his true long-term beloved from the Depths of the underworld my lips did not move anymore suddenly a deep loud vibration of my voice exploding words violently Echoing loudly but powerful Do you remember we first met remember What I Taught you imzadi can you still Sense my own thoughts dressed from The NASA Bodysuit was an black/grey 2379 Starfleet uniform with heel-boots with rank pips with a Combadge hair with Bangs were longer looked like Deanna Troi of Betazed of Brown-black eyes were Black irises he was in shock what you call me he was speechless in horror of my new looks were from Marina Sirtis then he Kissed me deeply then felt need from him was his beloved his true imzadi oh man Would you please get a room around here her hair is Styled but cut with bangs were very sexy But adult to flare then too late myself was in heat in phase searching for a husband was a Betazoid sex drive was still flirting darting my Black eyes was in desire placed my twin suddenly our romance was heating up gone fiery on him in love with him was madly attracted to men were older oh crap she's dating him first gross she's into love with him she's taken Hello Sam they are kissing as a couple dressed in Starfleet uniforms oh man her hair looks very mature from the actress's hairstyle looks fiery a spa treatment a massage and oiling and lotioning and lathering and aloe vera and vapor rubbed removed hair from her purged was detoxed a cut from her idol she is falling madly in more in love with her new mate is her true imzadi it was the Betazoid term of enderment suddenly my own mother appeared with a thin man her valet known as Homn dressed like Lwaxana Troi she was on Vacation to see me hair was fixed and fiery Paul it's Mother again oh no who my accent sounded like hers she lives in Jacksonvile Florida her car broke down is a Limo Hello Mother who is he please this is my valet herself in robes who is he meet my mate my imzadi Paul Erik Lahote gladly in time myself was still imprinted by him it was a psychic lock the beauty treatments made me at peace the best friends holy crap nice bangs how stylish but fiery was still more very beautfiul my dad noticed the bangs holy smokes then was tested for telepathy Charles she's telepathic from her mother but she's a empath oh no young man we started dating you took her to a spa clinic she's overstressed but needed a break of her studies Dad He and I Are mated for life yikes who are you Solok madam my crew oh no he was 20 he paled was afraid of my new muscular mate but Strom this is my imzadi her hair looks different how stylish she's 18 you are 19 yes a adult in my right took duties gladly the hands shaken suddenly a very more roaring burst but roaring of a starship was from the planet Vulcan hoods removed then pointed ears slanted eyebrows myself forged a formal traditional but ceremonial Vulcan ta'ai salute cold but devoid of emotions he sighten me was more beautfiul was born with part-adult and part-teenaged Ocampan ears were pointed with more arched eyebrows were a elegant but more rich Sch'n T'Gai slanted was not human but a Vulcan woman Captain about her ears and eyebrows we like ours she had taken a mate bonded for life her hair is frizziest were more ringed with twin clips looks like Lieutenant Saavik of Vulcan has a beauty treatment what is that aroma it's her scent is sweet smelling and rich how tall she looked is calm icy what you attain it's Kolinahr good god Man she is thin of a Diet it's from Emily made her Vulcan foods went Vegetarian officially she is still in school like a Starfleet cadet studied more harder has good but great grades iit's finals for Graduation yes we are now Fourth class we wear Starfleet uniforms due to the school code we are still cadets by the time posted aboard the T'Kumbra oh no he went white of his muscles hey Paul yeah with my imzadi crap we are Bells yes K'idwa it was Vulcan for soul star A-hem Strom yikes get me out of town of aliens on Earth.
Guest chapter 19 . 5/26
Worst story ever
brina1 chapter 21 . 3/29
Bella should kill Jacob
Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward chapter 20 . 2/25
That’s it? Where is the ending? Even a story with a sequel has an ending. Now I’m not even sure if it’s worth it reading your other stories :(
AliceCullen0629 chapter 21 . 12/18/2019
thanks for the sequel
andrewpine chapter 1 . 12/6/2018
It what would life be like.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2017
Wow wow wow! This story is soooooo incredibly BAD monotone childish bullshit I
no writers do some tweaking to the characters and plot but this is just super stupid who ever a wolf imprints on Cannot be harmed it's the reason renesme wasn't killed (and she's half vampire) in breaking dawn they will protect the above all else and they understand through there mind link what an imprint is so jake would never act that way not only because he's a wolf but also because he loves Bella and would protect her against all aging as he did in breaking dawn when not only was she married to a vampire but pregnant to one he also protected her because he could feel the imprint to Nessie before it actually happend that's how powerful it is I understand ur not trying to write twilight completely the same but at least stay true to the facts not only that but the story is cheesy and just not well written at all! They will probably be some 12 year old out there who like it tho... And Sam would never just Hand Jacob Alpha even in the story he didn't they split in to 2 packs it's just awful really... Anyone out there who like well written Bella bad Paul stories read never on my mind! It's amazingly well written funny and has a great plot(is my fave) also read be like water, the devil you know and knight in silver armour all very good Fics.. As for the person who wrote this pls don't write anymore or if you do have a decent realistic plot and pay attention to detail maybe read some other ones before you do
andrewpine chapter 13 . 8/25/2017
Okay i am done with this crap.
andrewpine chapter 12 . 8/25/2017
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andrewpine chapter 11 . 8/25/2017
Seriously.i hope you have it set up that the pack kills you don't i will be moving on to another story.
andrewpine chapter 10 . 8/25/2017
I think it is a ridicules story in hell would pass on the alpha to Jake when he knew what he was doing and thinking make no should be protecting Bella since she is an imprint not giving him the opportunity to harm her or her wolf.i hope to hell you are going somewhere with this that get resolved quickly maybe after Paul gets around to telling Bella the truth.
andrewpine chapter 9 . 8/25/2017
Now that they have declared themselves will he finally get around to telling Bella the truth? will Jakey have to be put down for his stupidity?
andrewpine chapter 8 . 8/25/2017
Isn't that so cute.
andrewpine chapter 5 . 8/25/2017
First 't string it along.
andrewpine chapter 3 . 8/25/2017
Will his jealousy be cause him to phase soon,and will he do it in front of her?
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