Reviews for Devotion
Criala chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
I think this is one of my favorite stories ever. It's rather rare for me to find stories that I like on here, since most of the content isn't appealing to me and it's so hard to find good stories for what does appealing to me.
This was really good, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. You did a wonderful job, and I love your writing.
Daliha chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Wow! I'm glad to have stumbled upon this. I loved every word. Good job. You're right there are very few interesting Kurama fics. :D
Chibi Binasu-chan chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Ohhh, I liked this, very interesting. It took me a while to grasp what you were getting at, I was like.. wait. Is this some other character we know? But nope. An OC, how great! haha Who has no name, and that was something I especially liked. I'm sure there are many girls like her that did the same, it's as if they are characterized in one woman.

So yeah, very nice one-shot, I will definitly take a look at your other fics! :)

Have a cookie,

~Chibi
Ylang-Ylang chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
First, the criticism so brace yourself cause I'm going to be hard:

This wasn't an Kurama/OC.

There, I said it! I'm sorry I had to be so harsh, but this needed to be pointed out.

Otherwise, EXCELLENT job!

Normally I Loathe (notice the capital L?) OC, specially with one of the main guys. It's usually the female OC is 'optimistic, antisocial, rude, depressed, fiery-tempered, etc' (essentially out attituding the main characters). However, this story had a quiet, reflective charm.

If you knew the depth of my loathing for any OC to be paired with one of the guys, you would know just how amazed I am to have liked this story.

Your story was original, touching and had an amazing depth.
rain chant chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Wow. This is an amazing Kurama/OC. I love how original it is! The idea of Kurama growing old is interesting; it's not something that seems possible, somehow. But I'm digressing. The story was absolutely awesome and I really enjoyed it.
Graphospasm chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
I really liked this. Like, probably too much. I think it's a great and touching spin on an often overlooked phenomenon. No one gets over a first love, and Kurama certainly has the potential to leave a trail of broken hearts in his wake...

In the anime there are a few scenes of Kurama being talked to by several girls at once (one compliments him like a fangirl at one point) but you never see them chasing him around or anything. He also, apparently, helps out in clubs and gets many offers to join them, but he always turns those offers down. The rabid fangirls you see in fics are kind of an exaggeration of the truth. However, someone like him escaping becoming an idol in a Japanese highschool seems impossible. It's a safe bet that he had popularity in spades.

Thanks for the shoutout, too, by the way. I did this horrible doubletake thing when I read it because I wasn't expecting to see my name mentioned at all. XD Such a nice surprise doesn't happen very often!

Great job. Please do keep it up!

~G.
hana4262 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
You make me happy for the countless time today! Thank you..! And i tried finding which part of my story inspired this awesome fic of yours but didn't find any.. I don't really think i deserve the credit..

I don't know how to put this in any other way instead of this: THIS FIC WAS AMAZING, EPIC AND IT'S PHENOMENON! At first I thought of it until she graduated but it turned out to be till her death.. One of the best fic i've read lately since I don't have much time allotted for reading fics nowadays.. And the summary did make up for the 'odd' title.. And I just know that people who didn't clicked this just missed a rollercoaster ride to a Kurama fan girl's heart (which is sorta similar to mine).. I really admire your style of writing and i hope that one day I'll be able to write as wonderful as you.. And thank you for saying my name, making me happy, inspiring me to write better and for sacrificing your sleep to make this..