This is an awesome romance fic! :D I loved how you quickly got to the juicy romantic bits instead of using several paragraphs to describe the character's feeling stowards each other. :)
I love the Mai x Lin pairing! Lin needs more love! :3
By the way, who is Basse? Oh, and will this be a Lin x Mai x Naru love triangle? .

im looking forward to more im curious now

Yo thats was great cant wait to read more!

ok pls upload soon.

Wahahaha! Oh my I loved this can't wait till u update! Keep up the good work!

oooooo Lin got seduced..ooooooo then what? what happens next?

hmm. interesting. not like others I've seen... Lin seems a bit OC... But Its good! please continue!

kewl beans _ i hope to read more soon heheh

lin x mai ff yay!and m rated so cool pls update ASAP

I love Mai and Lin as a couple! Great story! can't wait to read more! Update soon and keep up the good work ;)

aww.. Its so sweet! I like lin more than naru.

update soon

And what happened then? I want to know Please. Update soon.