Love it!

Love these Molly/Jim fics! I wonder if you could make a chapter thing? Or maybe a simple drabble collection. :P Thanks for writing them! XD I just don't wanna spam your inbox with like 4 different reviews, so I'm just saying great job for all at once. XD
Thanks for writing! I enjoyed reading! :P
-Misty

Beautifully done. I love the interaction between them. Too bad he wasn't wearing her bustier. ;)

I love this.

I've always kind of figured Molly was either bad, or going to go bad. Well done, though I wish you would have made this a multi chapter fic

It's smart and thrilling! I love it! A bit odd of Jim to be wearing lady's clothing, but I won't judge too much. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I had to go on to find this thing amidst all your Nano posts. XP What an awesome idea for a ficlet! That Moriarty actually likes Molly and Molly actually likes Moriarty and they are both SECRETLY EVIL. X3 I've never read anything like this, and I really love it. It would make an interesting plot twist, if in the second season Molly was working as a mole for Jim. OOOOH

But yeah, wonderful work, dear. Truly ingenious. _

ASDFGHJKL GET IN MY BELLY AUTHOR. GET IN MY BELLY AND MARRY ME NOW. I love evil!Molly with all my heart~ I just adore her so much and and and and and and and and and... you did a great job writing about her.

This is absolutely epic. I really love your style. The way you use images in the story like the shirt, the way he moves and positions himself, his gestures, and the way she reacts, let the reader really picture this and at the same time are give us insight about how you portray the characters. I really love what you've done with Molly, and about why she is the way she is. Your characterization of her is more interesting than how she's written in the show. And Moriarty was just awesome- every thing that he did, in my opinion, meshes with his character as portrayed in the show. You describe his actions and motivations in a way that is very much believable.

This story was made of so much win that I am not quite sure what to say about it. Thanks for giving us such an awesome growth and expansion on Molly's character. This was just a great read on a few different levels. :)

mind bending cool. adore this. i always thought molly was too one dimensional, you have given her a superb past and an interesting future. what if, she becomes irene addler, after meeting jim? and holmes calls her the woman? just a thought.

Couldn't think of anything that everyone else hasn't said, but this deserves more reviews - so, brilliant! And I didn't notice the OT3 til after I read the story, it made me laugh

This is brilliant. There is definitely not enough Molly\Jim fanfiction out there.

I absolutely adored how you portrayed Molly, as simply alone rather than weak like most people tend to do. And you Jim, I don't even have anything to say on him, you have him down to a T with all the extra things like the money and the barbecued cats thing.

I really hope the show decide to go down this route, with Molly as an evil accomplice. It would be.. Interesting. ;)

I shall be eagerly waiting for more of this! Please, do continue. :)

You're writing fanfiction halfway through NaNo because it's about Moriarty. And he's so deliciously evil. So there he was calling to you, saying "you know you want to write me, why don't you just give in?" and you were helpless and unable to do anything but exactly what he wanted. In a way it's not your fault, Moriarty can make anybody do anything. )

I like the way you write Molly and her relationship with Jim. There are shades of Joker and Harley. Because we all know that what every genius, albeit slightly psychopathic mastermind needs is a beautiful woman to do his bidding.

Oh, this is brilliant. Not a pairing I'd have gone looking for before. Molly is usually written so very weak and shallow and that is just annoying. But the way you crafted her to be something not so much weak as brittle and not as much shallow as hiding, waiting . . . that was fascinating. And you did an excellent job showing that. It was easy to believe this was the same Molly shown on the show. And your Moriarty! Now that was just perfect. You had him down like he was living and breathing right there. And the chemistry you created between them! Fabulous! I could feel it through the screen. And not just the chemistry she felt for him. I could believe by how you presented it, that he was more than a little bit intrigued by her. Oh! And the depth you brought to his character. Little things they had in common that we wouldn't have suspected to be the true bits. Like him saying he really does love sudoku and cats. And his giddiness to be sharing things with her. In many ways, in this story, Molly is to Moriarty what John is to Sherlock. I just loved it. And the lines! You had such fantastic lines. Like the bit about him being able to murder her if she absolutely insisted and him being bored and the bit with the shirt! And I loved the idea of Molly being nervous because Jim liked to do silly things like replace the money in her wallet with paper and smiley faces. Obviously, I just adored this in so many ways it hurt. I really hope you write this pairing again. I'd love to read more of them if you wrote it like this. Fantastic job. -Muse