Whoa, that's a bombshell. She's no longer a Grey Warden? I wonder what's happening. I was excited to see the update since it has been a while, and now...I'm even more curious. I want more! lol Great chapter even though I am a little confused about everything going on at the moment, I'm sure all will be explained in future chapters.

Wow! I definitely want to see where this is going. Alistair's emotions are all over the place? I'm going to have to go back and re-read because I must have missed the explanation for why the taint was leaving her earlier in the story. Anders/Justice...yeah he'd protect a fellow mage especially from a not-so-Templar King that happened to hurt her so badly through the years.

Reviews have slowed for us all, sweetie. The hullabulloo with the site and it's Summer, which means things slow down even more. Everyone is out, about, doing stuff. Winter picks up as people are indoors and want to read. Don't force it. *HUGGLES*

WOW! I didn't saw that coming ! and Deedo let him go soooo...easy?or she had something else ready for him ?and Cullen still love her? this is becoming more interesting - but please , please next time...long , very long chapter !PLEASE !I want to know what Deedo will do soon !

I still can't believe Alistair did that...so when Deedo slapped him, he totally deserved it. I wouldn't want to mess with her when she's mad...XD

Just started reading this today. Excellent! If I were her I would forget about Alister!

This is getting rather interesting...Cullen still obviously cares for Deedo. And now Alistair is on his way to Kirkwall...

Hmm...can't wait for the next chapter...XD

you do you enjoy taunting me!I'm glad you update but...sooooo short chapter?this is not you!I'm glad also that Deedo is mad on Alistair - it was time she react, no?so I'm waiting interesting thinks to happen

Oh my the poo has hit the fan. Oh Deedo, flying off the handle with that temper! ROFL!

Why did Alistair go and break Deedo's heart again? *sighs* Well, hopefully there is a good explanation as to why that strange woman was in the room with him.

And I wonder how it's going to go once he finds out that Cullen is now the Knight-Commander of the Templars in Kirkwall. I think things are getting REALLY interesting now...XD

glad to see you're back and didn't gave up!as for the update I must say that I did not understand much ! has Alistair , again , left her?Or the Chantry didn't approved ? or she ran ? orrrrrr...please update soon!LOL!

YES ! Now you will start the "new"part! I'm on holliday and I have all the time in the world to bother you , soooo..."Did the Chantry approve?" or the landsmeet?

come on already ! get to the new part !I was sad that you cut some good parts of the story when you rewrite it , but with the origins of mage is easy to understand now , hope you will update soon and not to wait a push .You know I check daily to know that if you wrote something new - sometimes FF don't notify -

Okay romantic and HOT! And you think I write hot monkey smut? PFffttt. Nice chapter, I think I need to dump a bucket of ice into a tub and sit in it. Nicely done! _ *fans self*

need to fan myself after reading that methinks cant wait to see whats in store next