This was hot. Definitely.

But the Bigfoot throwaway line tended to reduce the chapter's intensity. Oh, I knew you tossed it in for laughs, and it caused some amusement. But, for me, the abrupt shift in tone, from sweaty erotic to oddball humor, was jolting.

Man! Poor Freddie, he's got to be a deep shade of blue, being interrupted with both Melanie and Sam. This poor dude needs some relief. And Sam lost her special panties - Aww! Maybe Freddie can take her shopping for some new lingerie.

Tsk, tsk, Marissa. You demanded that Fredward march into the bathroom to clean himself up. Trust me, lady, given his frustration at coitus interruptus, Marissa-style, he will be heading into the bathroom even without prompting. He'll simply be taking matters into his own hands, so to speak.

He wants to avoid blue balls.

Not bad. Open your story up a little bit. More detail not just sex.

This is really good. I'm excited to see this story continue. Hope you update soon.

Update soon?

This was the best fanfic ive seen yet. it was so accurate and I could totally tell what episode you were writing about. keep it up! ;)

iSave Your Life was really the last of Creddie. The big "controversial" shipping ep, iStart A Fan War, really illustrated just how much Freddie was over Carly: he helped her with her crush on Adam.

If we go back and look at iSYL with hindsight, we should notice a few things.

1. Dan Schneider treats the Creddie kisses frivolously. The audience sounds he inserts are giggles and "Woo" calls, the sort of sounds you might hear from children laughing about catching a friend kissing someone.

2. Dan Schneider also uses background sounds of s storm when Carly and Freddie are alone together, to help create an ominous, unsettled feeling.

3. Freddie does not tell Carly he loves her, nor does he let Carly say it to him in that final elevator scene. I always felt the elevator's descent symbolized Freddie's waning Carly-crush: as the elevation lowered, so too did Freddie's juvenile interest in Carly.

On the other hand, contrast that with how the Sam-Freddie romance was treated.

1. Dan Schneider treated every Seddie kiss much more seriously, almost reverently. The kiss they shared on the fire escape quiet, serious and heartfelt. No audience laughs or "Woo..." And we all remember the courtyard scene in iOMG. Quiet, with just the two of them, The audience sounds we hear are pleased gasps of surprise when they kiss. No giggles. No laughter.

2. Note also the music and background sounds we hear whenever Sam and Freddie kiss. Much more emotional and solemn, as if we are witnessing something truly important.

3. Dan also gave Sam and Freddie their own elevator scene. That one, unlike the Creddie one, was NOT played for laughs. It was emotional and wrenching, like a metaphorical punch to the gut to us Seddie shippers. And yet... and yet... The scene held out hope. Sam and Freddie said they might try again, when he was more abnormal, and she more normal. Then they got back onto the elevator to kiss for a few hours more... and the elevator went UP. The elevator rose, as the two continued to passionately kiss.

Unlike the Creddie elevator that signaled a dwindling crush, the elevator with Sam & Freddie symbolized a growing closeness, and deeper love between the two, no matter if the were dating or not.

Someone with a dirty mind might also realize the elevator sliding upwards in the elevator shaft could suggest a growing lust, bulging erection, and building heat between the two.

Like it please update I know is almost 2 years but maybe?

Ah! Why hasn't this gone forward! Please make it happen!

please update this seems to be a really good story and i would love to read the rest of the story

Awesome story! This is exactly how I imagined Sam's diary to look like if she ever had one. :)

I'm really liking this story so far! although, i think sam's spelling/grammar is a little occ, but i guess it's your writing style. please update asap.

Nice chapter.

Nice chapter. Please continue.