Shit garbage trash

please update, it's brilliant

This one of the only stories I have laughed so hard at. I really wished you would have continued to write it.

You know, you have your timeline mixed up. Maybe it was deliberate, maybe not, but if I remember correctly, Hinata was three or four years old when the incident occurred. That means, Naruto must be that age as well. I think her age may have slipped your mind or maybe you decided it wasn't important and made this just a fact in your story. Either way, I figured I may as well mention it. Also, I haven't double checked the published / last updated date, so its entirely possible that some facts we know NOW were still a question mark back then.

Cheers!

umm you spelled Jinchuriki wrong

Pleas new chapter

Suprise Fallout?!

LOL!

So Nagi is basically a yangire while almost everyone she befriends acts kind of like a yandere towards her. Except without the hurting/killing her because she too good for the world or to keep her for themselves.

First time I've seen a fem!Naruto go this way. Love your writing and hopefully you'll start updating this soon.

I'm totally out of the loop with the Slaneesh or something. I'm sure others are too. One tip is to never cross things over from other fanfiction to your current one...without explaining origins. Anyways, I've come to the conclusion that all ninjas are wimps in this; it's lighthearted; and security sucks balls.

O-Kay! So, a bit cliche with the Sasuke hatred, and you made Neji super OOC...which is bad, cause you got rid of everything that made him...him. Anyways, now he's a chump just like Kyubi...I hope all the guys don't end up that way. Also cliche with the use of Zabuza and Haku...I saw that coming from a mile away. All things considered, your grammar and spelling still suck, and this fanfiction is better suited to Wattpad. I'm sure it would be popular on there too. More advanced than the regular popular crap on there, but still in the same league. You really need to get rid of that habit of talking to yourself in the author notes by the way; it's the sign of an inexperienced writer. I'm sure if you go to Wattpad, you'll see all sorts of those in there. People like to try and be funny..it doesn't work.

Wow, you may Kyubi a wimp...not the direction I would go (even for giggles/humor), but I'm looking forward to see what you're going to do with it... The grammar isn't the best; a lot of sentences are missing commas, and simply don't read well. You also have a problem with spelling and past/present tense. If English is your first language, you should be ashamed. If it's not, I congratulate you on how few mistakes you've made.

With the last two paragraphs, that's more like Obito than Kakashi, since he was actaully late to the Entrance and Graduation Exams.

I won't be reading such trash. Kill yourself to make the world a better place.

It's okay. We all like insane. Though I have to say, I think Romance is too sane a secondary topic for this story.