Congratulations on your engagement! I hope your wedding is as magical as Sarah and Jareth's.

This was really sweet. It would be nice to have at least two more chapters: one where Sarah gets to see her family again, and one where she and Jareth have a , I don't know if you realize this or not, but January 8th is David Bowie's birthday(he turns 66 this year), so I thought the update date was definitely approriate.

Its a great and cute chapter! They are so happy, and Jareth absolutely deserves it! Update soon!

that's great then maybe some kids would fill the void some more

Heh heh. I like this chapter.

God, Sarah...what the hell were you thinking?!

This seems like such an abusive relationship. He tells her to do exactly as he says or he'll punish her (due to an arranged marriage she has to agree to or die) and she just nods and lifts her shirt so he can remove tattoos that he only knows about from spying on her! And then after 5 minutes she tells him she loves him?

She could've phone them to say goodbye (

i sure hope he does every man wants to protect his queen from getting hurt

Didn't like the part where jareth whipped Sarah or when calabar kidnapped her :( but the rest is awesome! I also liked how you wrote jareth after the beating as a loving husband. he really does love her. *tear slips down cheek*.

well i am glad jareth and sarah are happy

This is a wonderful story so far! Hope to see more soon!

nice chapter keep up the great work!

Oooh :) im liking where this is going :D please keep going!

that's true we all try to hide the "marks" our men leave on us, i though am proud to show mine if its on my neck only if i'm not in a play. this is a great story i hope you finish it sometime soon.