I like this, nice structure, very nice idea, great characterization. Also, you have really good grammar and spelling, which is always good to see. This is just fantastic, it leaves you wanting more and it definitely plays with the attraction that really could've been there.

now i wanna read more lucy/evan stuff :(

Oh, snap. R-E-J-E-C-T-E-D.

Lucy, oh Lucy...

Do a companion fic! It left off in a weird place :)

i liked how you kept lucys snark

sequel? LUCYS REVENGE!

haha she has another "OPP OPERTUNITY OPP OPPORTUNITY"

and then evan will have to do another "Tell her" to patrice

(with Brett and kendras help this time lol)

and now youve got urself a sequel! i can help w/ ideas if u rlly dont want to do it or i could write a sister fic w/ your permisson