I THINK THAT TOO! Every time when I get married in a game, the first think I do is knock myself out to see if your spouse notices (Hooray for ToT!) - is that weird?

Anyway, I love this little one-shot. The thoughts that go through her mind after she falls are, to me, accurate. Vaughn reacts exactly how I would have thought he would. And I love that you put in about porridge, his favourite dish :3

My two favourites from this game were Denny and Vaughn. I love being able to read about Vaughn because of this. I love your writing style, too. So, um, if you have had a chance, or ever the inclination, and know Denny's character at all... could you do a fic about him? Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?

I love it! (:

You're right. A lot of people don't recognize how the independance must cause friction. This is a lovely consideration. Also, it's cute you framed it with the mine fall. Kewl piece.

This is amazing and sweet. It is very well written and reflects both Chelsea's and Vaughn's personalities accurately. There isn't much to say but congratulations on a job well done on this incredible fanfiction.

Atjwrojhe, oh, I love this a lot. The way you've written Chelsea and Vaughn's relationship was so lovely. His fierce love for her was made clear in Vaughn's own special way. And the baby! I was so glad to hear it was alright. And Vaughn as a husband, is just...so, so sweet. Very, very well-written oneshot, and no mistakes that I caught. You should definitely be proud of this. :)