Love the story!

it is very nice, i am a huge fan of yu-gi-oh

Woah that's freaky...That's my student number!...

I thought I was signed in but I wasn't so here is my official review of this story! I loved it, and I can't wait to read what happens next!

as much as I wanted them to kiss, I do love this story. It's so lovely, and Seto and Serenity is my favorite pairing in Yugioh! I have been trying to find a good story with these two, I may have found it in this story I hope you continue with this series of stories! It is so sweet with making Kaiba seem too out of character.

the fact that the story's slower than u usually write them is kind of a good thing for readers and for you too actually because it allows you to help the reader explore the characters deeper while making the readers wait in anticipation to see whether or not serenity and seto will get together or not! And it helps you surprise the reader if you decide to insert a plot twist or two! (haven't read to the end of the story yet if the story's even finished. I'll shut up and go read it now. ur doing a gr8 job btw, i love ur writing style!)

I went into Three Guys only hoping to fly through it so that I could read Resignation. To my surprise I found myself enjoying it immensely. Serenity is a easy to like heroine, and your written emotions are realistic. I also love the way that you describe clothing(help me with that you seamstress you lol). I already knew the basics of this story as I read it, but I was still surprised by some of the plot. It was a good read all in all, with few typo's and adorable banter.

Now on to RESIGNATION.

I did enjoy Peacewish's story as well and have enjoyed the introduction to yours too. It's a great way to get the characters to know each other anonymously while having them share a part of themselves so they can get to become closer to another.

Hi!

I liked this story a lot ) you told a cute story and you did well developing Serenity's character considering how little she's developed in the anime, I thought your Kaiba started off very well, and really in character, and maybe grew OOC faster than the story would allow, I mean, granted, you need him to be OOC at the end because otherwise, what would be the point? We need character development, but his maybe moved a little fast for my personal taste, but nevertheless I'm looking forward to the sister story, and I'm hopeful that Kaiba's POV will make his development more natural to read. All in all, my only pickiness comes from personal taste, and hell, you kept him more in character than most people who write this pairing do. Keep it up!

It was a sweet story ) I'm sure Seto knew all along it was Serenity, because he seems quite OOC in this story. I'm going to read your sequel, now ;)

Normally I don't read fanfiction at 2 in the morning unless it's a really good story, or an update I've been looking forward to. So first things first, congratulations on making a damn good story that kept me going and wanting to read more despite the late hour, I'm very glad I stumbled upon it.

I must say I liked the anonymity you kept with Seto and Serenity's identity, which was probably partly inspired by how that relationship unfurled in "Coffee Girl" (I swear Peaceship has a way of inspiring lots of YGO writers with that story!). This time however, Seto knew all about Serenity whilst she remained oblivious to the details, which was a refreshing twist in an otherwise overdone premise.

The white dragon chocolates and the charms were lovely trinkets that I can see Seto appreciating from her, especially the chocolates as it meant she paid particular mind to details and the things that he liked. Him giving her the paint set, and (mostly) paying for her dress was very much Kaiba-like, and still a nice gesture of how much he's grown fond of her rather than being his general cold, calculating self. It was rather plausible actually, considering how much time they've spent talking online and eventually, on the phone.

A lot about this story could have gone wrong and made Kaiba very OOC, but the mere fact that you had him aware of his relationship with Serenity and her family makes it easier to read about how forward with information he was being with her regarding personal details, as well as giving her the expensive gifts. I really liked the friendly exchange between the two of them, it was a very lovely touch to the shipping. I also really enjoyed when he kept reminding her about sleep; though I'm sure the man himself doesn't blink for more than two seconds before returning to work, it's still sweet and almost brotherly of him to tuck her in like that even if he might not be resting himself.

The ending wasn't completely cliched, particularly because of the lack of a kiss which, to be honest, I didn't mind being absent. Sure we all love to read that climatic moment when these opposites that have found attraction in each other finally affirm their feelings with the most romantic gesture of them all, but careful mind to how young the relationship is, and how much more development the characters require to truly appreciate the other, is also an essential factor in making such a treasured moment all that more epic. So I thank you in not rushing a kiss scene to fuel the likes of a fandom, you did very good with the final chapter.

I've got the tab all ready to read for "Resignation", I truly can't wait to see how things continue with my favourite YGO pairing. Once again, great job with this story. Overall, it had a wonderful, fresh, friendly vibe to it without taking away from the natural personalities of each character, and the sweetness of the relationship between the pairing was much to be desired. I liked this story a lot, keep up the good work!

Sincerely,

P.O.J.A _

Hey there,

I just read your story last night, and decided to review today.

First of all, I really enjoyed the plot. I strive for secretive plot devices for some reason. Thank you for leading up to the meeting of Serenity and Seto with their messages and phone conversations, these were rather entertaining.

I found myself laughing at the small bits of humor that eased the story line. Great job with those bits and pieces of potential comfort.

Overall I think you did a good job with keeping the characters in character. I realize that it's hard to work with a non-canon pairing such as this one. When Seto did open up more it did seem like it could actually happen given the circumstances. Serenity stayed pure and innocent as she is portrayed in the series.

This last chapter had me on my toes as I waited for the meeting with Seto and Serenity. You kept me in suspense, even though the outcome wasn't actually hard to guess at. I like Serenity's reaction to finding out that 'Seth' was Seto. (I liked the alias, by the way.) Although the ending seemed to come too quickly, I was still happy with it. It was smart to not end with a kiss, as that is a bit cliché.

Anyways, I'm ready for "Resignation" now, and will be overjoyed to see the story played out in Seto's point of view.

Thanks for such a nice Silentshipping story,

-Azugirlohshc

Haha so we've finally come to the end! It was definitely nice to see some bonding moments between Serenity and her mom and I actually really liked that scene where Serenity realizes that she is in love with Seth. It was a really subtle but cute way of showing her realization.

Anyway, the actual confession scene was fleshed out better than you originally had it. I feel like there could've been more tension and that Serenity's acceptance could've happened slower, but it is a pretty hard scene to write in the first place and you still did a pretty good job with it. And anyway I'm sure you'll expand on it more in Resignation :). Congrats on finishing this story!

This was an awesome ending. I am looking forward to the sequel. The little love thing about someone being the first call was cute, but frankly I don't put much stock in rules like that, especially when they involve modern technology.

Serenity's little daydream while she was getting her nails done was a nice touch, and it really added to the anticipation of her meeting Seto.

I liked it-I liked this chapter. The beginning, where all the dance preparations took place, that worked nicely as a set-up. Again, readers knew what was coming later on, and you strung us along with those little tension builders and made us anticipate the big "AH-HA!" moment. I shall admit that I squealed shamelessly like a fan-girl when Serenity and Seto just about met and braced myself with their inevitable first-encounter hostilities.

Personally, I would have liked their meeting/Serenity's reasoning to be a little longer and slower paced, simply because digesting "Seto was/is nice to you; Seto is your one true love" takes some brain time. I agree with the logic-path you gave Serenity, her coming to the conclusion how she could love Seto; but as a romance junkie, I guess I just wanted to see all of her emotions (only at this moment, all other moments you illustrated very well) and have them reconcile with each other. But those are only my personal preferences. All in all, a good meeting between the two. I still rolled around on the ground in happiness over them.

The ending was great. It wasn't very clichéd since we didn't get a usual kiss or the typical "will you be my girlfriend?" spiel. So I was tickled happy with how you ended-mostly. I did instinctively shout out, "YOU TEASE!" when I read the final word of the chapter. I couldn't help it, since you basically introduced Seto and Serenity's relationship and just leave the readers to hang. But then I read your author's note, realize that there IS a sequel, and forgive you to move on to the other update. You're so good at this tugging-the-reader-along business.

Anyway, thank you for the story, for the timely update, and I wish you luck with your sequel and other works! Happy Writing!