Well shit flood has hit the fan litterly.

you know alpha company tenechely inclodes everybody in noble team except jorge and six , thats what the A stands for alpha bis for beta and g is for gama

What about spartan Blue team (Fred 104, Kelly 087, Kurt 051, Linda 058, Joshua 029, and John 117) or red team (Alice 130, Douglas 042, and the other spartan cant remember name or number.)

1. John-117. It makes sense as he was in cryo-sleep the whole time. Make something up. Slipspace portal maybe.

2. Jorge. Just where exactly did that slipspace portal go? ;)

Mate, an entire squade of spec op eliets would have slaughtered shepered and crew. You have made the eliets to damn stupid. I just can't read this anymore.

inconsistencies make me angry.

"A new enemy that broke the pattern eliminated with minimal resistance."

-Sazzan.

"*Cough*AHEM LOAD OF CRAP!*Cough Again*"

-He Who See's.

I know this reply seems a bit snarky, but it really high-lights how laughable that statement is or at least should be considering how the Covenent should be able to handle the Reapers with a lot less difficulty than most other species considering that they don't really on Mass Effect technology and are in all likey-hood far advanced than them.

Okay...I have slight problems with the Reapers assault of the Covenent.

1) Please oh please oh please tell me that the Covenent does not get their asses kicked by the Reapers. Granted Reaper technology is highly advanced, but I'm fairly certain they still suffer from the same weaknesses as other mass effect based ships, I.E. their shielding doesn't do jack against directed weapons. Add this with the fact that the Covenent doesnt even use Mass Relays (meaning the Reapers lose a tactical advantage because Covenent ships can pretty much warp to anywhere they won't, even behind a fleet guarding a planet), have shielding that is effective against all forms of attacks, and generally are larger or about as large as a Reaper, and I'm pretty sure the Reapers would probably get their over-confident asses handed to them.

2) If you do decide to make the Covenent incur heavy losses, please ensure that it was at a Massive battle that took out more Reapers than Covenent because although they are hell bent on human destruction, making them seem like wimps against even the Reapers like I believe you did with the High Charity scene is really inconsistent and implausable given how advanced and large their forces are.

Okay I call crap on how easily Shepard and his team are moving through the ship. I know he's the hero and all but last I checked boarding parties dont usually come out of a Covenent ship without incurring rather heavy losses, more so for those lacking energy shielding.

And since when was Kolyat a skilled Drell Assassin? I doubt he was a rank amatuer and it was his father who was skilled. Also, considering he's the freakin' Arbiter, I really don't think he should be in the fight of his life fighting Kolyat. A spartan or Thane maybe, but not Kolyat.

I know your trying to make alliterations, but phase rounds shouldn't be able to penetrate Covenent energy shielding like wet tissue paper. They'd probably be more effective than standard rounds but when you consider that Covenent energy shielding can block even energy attacks, it'd still be more difficult to pierce through than regular kinetic barriers.

great story you have successfully meshed two different stories into one AMAZING story.

Choice #1: Noble Team

Choice#2: Master Chief

TALI'S PREGNANT?

And I wonder what will happen with the Halos. After all, all seven rings are intact and ready to kick ass.

Also, TALI'S PREGNANT?

Hmm...not sure as to why you don't have that many reviews...I love your story. A sequel, already? Joy! *looks ready to read*

God so far...update soon!